ok.............. so... One Woman at a time............. interesting hook.
Perhaps a better hook would be one heartache at a time? or one lesson at a time? MmmM not sure.
I personally don't think you need all those names in there because it sounds like you're repeating yourself just for the fun of it.
2 or 3 women is plenty I would think , otherwise you just sound like a player and no woman is ever good enough for you because they're always trying to "fix' you.
does that make sense?
In country music, if you want people to sing along, it has to be something that the guy wants to sing and the girls agree with. So, in that case, you do have that going for you!!! LOL
Wish I could be more help. but certainly needs a chantable chorus that everyone can sing along to! (all my ex's live in texas).. sort of vibe?