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The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: guest44 on May 07, 2026, 10:10:40 am


Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: guest44 on May 08, 2026, 09:34:59 am
Toad suck contest , oh man . Like usual Bill your in your own world
Thanks Elvis :)
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: guest42 on May 08, 2026, 04:10:06 am
Toad suck contest , oh man . Like usual Bill your in your own world
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: guest44 on May 07, 2026, 03:27:20 pm
Bill, the invite to come to Arkansas is still open... I'll take you to Toad Suck, Arkansas... If you come at the right time you can go to the Toad Suck Fest... bet they'd love this song there...

Yeah, I like your song...
Good Luck
Tex
I remember you saying that, If I'd enjoy being around people, sounds like it would be fun.
Thanks Tex
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: Tex on May 07, 2026, 03:23:29 pm
Bill, the invite to come to Arkansas is still open... I'll take you to Toad Suck, Arkansas... If you come at the right time you can go to the Toad Suck Fest... bet they'd love this song there...

Yeah, I like your song...
Good Luck
Tex
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: guest44 on May 07, 2026, 01:26:32 pm
Ok I got it now.!! Who wouldn't click on this title? lol  I had forgotten about those weird frogs!! Great fun song ya got there.!
Thanks :)
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: guest44 on May 07, 2026, 11:22:23 am
Link is not working ?
It's working for me, what happens when you click the link or does nothing happen?
Try this - https://soundcloud.com/bill-hengen-72395628/lick-the-toad?si=19f2b0c904ee415bbb0bb7110260852b&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: redwriter1 on May 07, 2026, 11:17:43 am
Ok I got it now.!! Who wouldn't click on this title? lol  I had forgotten about those weird frogs!! Great fun song ya got there.!
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: guest44 on May 07, 2026, 11:03:36 am
Link is not working ?
It's working for me, what happens when you click the link or does nothing happen?
Title: Re: Lick the Toad
Post by: redwriter1 on May 07, 2026, 10:45:42 am
Link is not working ?
Title: Lick the Toad
Post by: guest44 on May 07, 2026, 10:10:40 am
Words Me; Music Suno
I'll give this is a shot, though I'm suspecting it will fare the same as over TSF, as same members

song about identity crisis.

The blue footed boobie was a joke that became relevant to the song. Claude asked what was on my mind, I jokingly said, Boobies. It said that the conversation must have been cut off and that I might be talking about the blue footed boobie, which then blue footed boobies **** red rubies, popped into my head :)

There is a certain species of toad that secretes a toxic that when licked acts like a psychedelic for lack of better word

Crocodile = big mouth little feet. came about because I had two co-workers one french. patrick for weeks kept talking about
dating a woman, finally deni the frenchman said to patrick - you are like a crocodile, big mouth, little feet :)


https://suno.com/s/32JQ03B1lpTs4XOq

[Verse 1]
My eyes melt into hands becoming sand
Washing forever into the sea
And I can't stand up as my feet ran
Into the cold arms of an iguana man

[Chorus]
Licking the toad as he sucks my toes
Riding on the back of the unicorn
Trumpeting his golden horn
Chasing white ravens away

[Verse 2]
Chatting in a dingy bar with a crocodile
Who speaks of dreams and aspirations
While wailing in whiskey sours
Swallowing feet until he's the floor

[Chorus]
Licking the toad as he sucks my toes
Riding on the back of the unicorn
Trumpeting his golden horn
Chasing white ravens away

[Verse 3]
Slipping climbing infinite sand dunes
On my way down I see me the snake
Struggling to be free from gorging
On its own unimaginable tail

[Refrain]
AHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHAHHHHHH!

[Instrumental]

[Verse 4]
The ancient tortoise freed from a shell
Devours the hare running away happily
Into his mind where nothing he finds
Can satisfy what's never shown

[Outro]
The blue footed booby consumes red rubies
Producing purple opalescent pearls
[Spoken word]
And in them I see who I am to be