Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Elvis Nash on May 10, 2026, 08:51:41 pm
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Just an acoustic guitar , yeah Suno threw the stadium in . I guess If I recorded it , I would not do that Chris. Or maybe I would, since it be different . ha ha ha , all my songs are same, scars and redemption
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A stadium rocker eh? As so often is the case with your songs, I love the lyrics. I can't offer crits when it's this good. Keep em comin' Elvis. :)
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Wish I had 60k . lot to record thanks
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Great sounding tune. Some really awesome lines in there. Enjoyed listening.
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https://suno.com/song/d4f78960-41e0-4534-9988-b775893998a1
I got a dashboard Bible and a .45 grin
Been losin’ my religion ever since I was ten
Mama said, “Son, don’t dance with sin”
But the jukebox played and the devil walked in
There’s blood on my knuckles, dust on my boots
A past full of liars and barroom truths
I pray on Sundays, raise hell all week
Tryin’ to find forgiveness at the bottom of a drink
(Chorus)
I’m on the wrong side of heaven
But the right side of hell
Too wild for the angels
Too hard for a jail
I got one foot in fire
One hand ringin’ the bell
Yeah, I’m livin’ somewhere
Between goodbye and rebel
(Verse 2)
Met a woman in Reno with a cross tattoo
Said, “Baby, God’s tired of chasin’ you”
I laughed and ordered one more round
Said, “If He wants me bad enough, He’ll track me down”
Now the moon hangs low like a hangman’s rope
And every bad decision still smells like smoke
But I ain’t dead yet, so there’s time to raise Cain
Till the good Lord finally calls my name
(Chorus)
I’m on the wrong side of heaven
But the right side of hell
Too broke for salvation
Too mean to sell
I got scars like scripture
Stories I never tell
Yeah, I’m livin’ somewhere
Between goodbye and rebel
(Bridge)
Maybe saints ain’t saints
Maybe sinners ain’t lost
Maybe everybody’s payin’
For whatever they cost
And maybe grace rides shotgun
In a rusted Chevelle
For the wrong side of heaven
And the right side of hell
(Final Chorus)
I’m on the wrong side of heaven
But the right side of hell
Still singin’ my freedom
Through a smoke-covered yell
If the devil wants trouble
Tell him I know him well
Yeah, I’m dyin’ somewhere
Between heaven and hell