Starfish Songwriters

The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: IronKnee on May 12, 2026, 09:38:45 pm

Title: Re: It's Over
Post by: guest42 on May 13, 2026, 10:52:21 am

Beautiful guitar work

Title: Re: It's Over
Post by: IronKnee on May 13, 2026, 08:56:40 am

Thank you Elvis

Title: Re: It's Over
Post by: guest42 on May 13, 2026, 06:25:18 am

Thats very pretty and a great melody

Title: It's Over
Post by: IronKnee on May 12, 2026, 09:38:45 pm

Well, it's not Nashville, but it's me.
Anyone out there to offer a comment? Good, bad, ridicules?

Well, I guess not!  ???

          “IT’S OVER”
      Words & Music by Tom Tognaci / Ai produced Cover


Believe me when I say, “I love you”   
But I can see the future, too 
Some where there’s got to be another 
Some other love other than you

I’m here to tell you that it’s over! 
The final knot has been untied 
And though you’ll think this will blow over
That’s just “so-you”, tangled in pride

With all there was, I tried, to tell you 
I couldn’t fit a word edgewise 
Between the jibber and the jabber 
You couldn’t hear my weary sighs

I’m here to tell you that it’s over! 
Over, now that it’s finally out 
You say, compared to ice, I’m colder 
And that’s just what I’m talking about   

I’m here to tell you that it’s over!
At last, there came that final straw 
So cold, I turn to you this shoulder   
What more a picture can I draw?