Starfish Songwriters

The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: LAWHON on May 20, 2026, 09:28:10 pm

Title: Re: Ocean Breeze
Post by: guest42 on May 21, 2026, 12:40:02 am

You don't need Suno , Your playing is very cool. Structure it to a 3 minute song. You're a human , you can hire more humans for drums , bass . Whatever to make it an instrumental . Really hard to say that we have to say, we are humans . robots haven't taken over the world yet .

Humans players, what a concept.
https://www.fiverr.com

Title: Ocean Breeze
Post by: LAWHON on May 20, 2026, 09:28:10 pm

My name is Lawhon.

I play the guitar, fairly well, and like to noodle.
Someone suggested that I upload my noodling to an AI site called SUNO.
The idea is to let AI build the noodle into a complete song with lyrics.
So far, still trying to get that done.

The noodle in the link is "Ocean Breeze."

https://soundclick.com/song/15257966

I want the final song to talk about how someone feels good to have around like an ocean breeze.

The song is bluesy. I will be working up other noodles in other genres.

If ppl here would rather just see the finished song at the end, please let know.

Thanks

Lawhon