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The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: redwriter1 on June 02, 2026, 03:34:09 pm

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 07, 2026, 07:11:00 pm

Thank you for the comment Chris!  They did have a professional nashville singer start to do the demo, but my publisher called me and said she wasn't able to sing it and would I come down to do it.  so............. this was my first demo I ever sang on.  I know it could have been better but I only got a couple takes to get it done.

thanks again for commenting on it !!

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: ChrisPrice on June 07, 2026, 06:29:08 pm

I'm from the UK so I'm not really familiar with what happens over in Nashville. I try to avoid saying too much about Suno these days. I upset some of the AI guys over on TSF (now gone)..not intentionally, but hey.

I really like this song. It sounds real and that's a good thing in my book, perhaps because it isn't over-produced. I especially like the vocals here. You're a really good singer. And this is a great song. :)

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: guest42 on June 03, 2026, 08:32:10 pm

Quote from: John Voorpostel on June 03, 2026, 01:15:51 pm

Nice hook and song Kay Lynn...and yes nice to hear YOU in this

its the same deal you get what you pay for . Some cheap demo studios are junk
You can produce them your self now for about the same cost . Depends what you want to do with them , artist songs or pitch to publishers .

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 03, 2026, 02:19:58 pm

Yeah, I've tried to do that, but when I get to the "say this phrase" part, it just keeps rejecting it.

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: Tex on June 03, 2026, 02:09:01 pm

I think I've heard this before...but you still get two thumbs up(https://emoji.tapatalk-cdn.com/emoji106.png)(https://emoji.tapatalk-cdn.com/emoji106.png)

By the way with Suno you can put in your own voice Rob has done it on his last two or three songs, I don't know how to do it but he could tell you how.

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: John Voorpostel on June 03, 2026, 01:15:51 pm

Nice hook and song Kay Lynn...and yes nice to hear YOU in this

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 03, 2026, 10:57:31 am

Thank you so much for saying that.  And you're right, some Nashville demos are junk, but I think they did a good job with this one.

Listening back now, I can totally hear the difference between Suno and real musicians, but I still like to play with Suno as well.

I could actually load this demo in Suno and tell it to update the beat or sound, but then I would lose my voice. LOL

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: guest42 on June 03, 2026, 08:13:09 am

Well it's refreshing instead of robot songs . Big money in that if one hits .

Title: Re: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: LAWHON on June 02, 2026, 07:29:24 pm

Big LIKE.  (https://emoji.tapatalk-cdn.com/emoji122.png)

Title: All In Your Heart (1st published song)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 02, 2026, 03:34:09 pm

I just thought you guys would like to see my first published song and the Nashville demo they made of it.  I still like it, but what say you guys?

https://soundclick.com/song/14179005