Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: redwriter1 on June 10, 2026, 09:05:53 pm
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aww right I think I get it but...post something joyful girl
Well since you made the request I will comply!!! (smile)
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aww right I think I get it but...post something joyful girl
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Sweet and kinda soulful, love the "let's pretend" story line...maybe we should all have fun and pretend just little.
I agree, but in this instance, they are playing pretend because the real life screaming going on downstairs was too much to handle.
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Sweet and kinda soulful, love the "let's pretend" story line...maybe we should all have fun and pretend just little.
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Hay Kay-lynn,
Like Rob I remember this one I liked it back then and like it today.
Nice write.
Best to you,
Tex
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This song is new to me as I haven't been on this forum for long. I'm not surprised it's done well on Soundclick. A great vocal and a really strong musical arrangement. No crits from me..a lovely song. :)
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Hey Kay-lynn,
Yes, I've heard this one before, and I still love it. Those soaring synths sound awesome.
For some reason, though, I can't quite get used to the intro. To my ears, it sounds like it's in a different key than the rest of the song. Maybe that's just me.
Other than that, I think the song is excellent. The chorus is really catchy, and the whole track has a great energy to it.
Great write!
All the best,
Robert
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A few of you here already know this one, but I thought I would throw it out for any other comments. Thanks so much!
https://soundclick.com/song/15222980