Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Stone Flowers on June 11, 2026, 04:24:07 am
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Very enjoyable ode to optimism.
Message was clear and the music was very well matched.
Nice job.
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Oh yeah ...love this....came to me that this had shades of Canned Heat....some great tension building and relief here.
Yaw mon....After rain comes sunshine. Thank you so much for tuning in John and your kind words and suggestion...everting goan be awwright!
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Noticed HardTwist commeted on it, where'd he get off to?
Tanks man...he's hanging on Soundcloud and Bandcamp, says he get's more interaction than on the songwriter sites
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This sounds good man,
Noticed HardTwist commeted on it, where'd he get off to?
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Oh yeah ...love this....came to me that this had shades of Canned Heat....some great tension building and relief here.
There was also another band I wanted to cite...just could not...
BUT that means this is really &()*& good. Thank you!
Small suggestion for the bridge
second line....trailed by a brighter day
invokes the old expression, na regen komt zonneschijn ;)
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Everything's gonna be alright as long as keep creating songs like this! I want to hear a live band do it - but that's just me. A terrific up-lifting song. I really enjoyed this. :)
Gracias amigo, guess I'm just an optimist in this crazy world
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Everything's gonna be alright as long as keep creating songs like this! I want to hear a live band do it - but that's just me. A terrific up-lifting song. I really enjoyed this. :)
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My song, music, chord progressions, lyrics, and my actual voice singing it, instruments provided by Suno.
https://soundcloud.com/user-494998212/ready-for-the-storm-26?si=6f8cb3d2cfc74fd6b014405e281df146&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
You say the storm’s been comin your whole life
That’s why you just stay scared
I hear what you’re sayin bout being prepared
But out of the dark here comes a light
I’m thinking everything gonna be alright
Don’t get me wrong I’m ready for the storm
Just thinking that it won’t last long
Yeah I’m ready... to be reborn
Cuz the night is short short as the pain
Thinking everything gonna be ok
Chorus
Be alright be alright
I know tomorrow gona be reborn
Smiling at the sky ready for the storm
Hey I’m ready
Break
Bridge
There will always be a storm comin your way
Always be a brighter day
There will always be fear to fire up the fright
But maybe just maybe everything be alright
I’m thinking everything gona be alright
Be alright
Are you ready are you singing along
Can you feel the thunder rockin your bones
Are you praying that the winds won’t be strong
Well maybe just maybe the sun will stay high
And everything little thing will be alright
I said be alright be alright
I know tomorrow gona be reborn
Smiling at the sky I’m ready for the storm
There’s one comin on
Got to say strong
It won’t last long
Are you reeaady ready for the storm
Yeah