Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: John Voorpostel on June 11, 2026, 11:20:58 am
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Thank you Kay lynn, Steve and Chris.
In the things are never done department, I look at it again and again to look for better\more ways to make things move and tell the story.
Built a list so far and will release a fuller update later.
Doing the same with Galways Sons and with all I have learned now I want to go back to Pay For It and All Bad Together to make some tweaks.
First one we did together I will leave alone. Not because it is perfect as is just its a pretty good baseline for where I started.
This one I'm glad people see the humour in it.
I'm personally really proud of the Go Vegan on the fan stands wall.
I also want to do something with a can for Billy Goat.
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I'm really liking this. The Suno arrangement is very commercial - though it is a typical AI performance..so it sounds very familiar. That's not a criticism of the song at all...just an observation. Well done guys. :)
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Cool John...when I was listening to it I was almost hearing your voice and playing your guitar and then I realized you have a very distinct writing style that came through perfectly...good stuff
Steve
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Thanks Rob. Yes I changed the last page so this was down for a bit.
I had a lot of the images for this for awhile now awhile. During Covid I started rummaging for fun videos and Farm Team with the beautiful pun was top of mind
I am astounded Disney or Pixar has not done something like this...
Then when this got more serious when we posted to JPF and had you and Kay-lynn and Elvis dropped by ...gathered more images...so much more than I needed. But dropped it for lack of time
Ressurected it for the cell phone take and I am grateful you stripped out the audio for ther SUNO cover.
The prompted one was close but not quoite there for me.
The autotuned supercharged SUNOme
Very well done!!! Congrats! This is so cute, I love it!
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Thanks Rob. Yes I changed the last page so this was down for a bit.
I had a lot of the images for this for awhile now awhile. During Covid I started rummaging for fun videos and Farm Team with the beautiful pun was top of mind
I am astounded Disney or Pixar has not done something like this...
Then when this got more serious when we posted to JPF and had you and Kay-lynn and Elvis dropped by ...gathered more images...so much more than I needed. But dropped it for lack of time
Ressurected it for the cell phone take and I am grateful you stripped out the audio for ther SUNO cover.
The prompted one was close but not quoite there for me.
The autotuned supercharged SUNOme
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John,
I loved doing this collab with you. You should have mentioned that this was your original tune and vocal:
https://youtu.be/C79tjuyGy5k?si=0Ck0P9S0J7oToEnn
It's amazing what Suno did with it.
Your version sounds more natural. The Suno version is more radio-friendly.
Take care - Robert
P.S. I love your video. This is the best so far.
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Robert Baitinger stripped the audio out of my cell phone video (below) and produced a SUNO cover. Took it and created this video for it. Fun stuff
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eIUvnPUfi4A