Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: popitup on June 13, 2026, 06:51:49 pm
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Ok ok... you don't have to put it in all CAPS! lol ......
Carry on (smile)
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This is my favorite passage.
AND I’M HEADIN’ DOWN THE COAST WITH A HEAVY LOAD
. . . When the coast is clear I might just call you up, if I ever get the nerve . . .
How it blends down the coast,............. when the coast is clear.
Would love to play with this in Suno, but only with your permission.
Love the guitars.
Regarding Suno . . . respectfully, NO YOU MAY NOT !
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This is my favorite passage.
AND I’M HEADIN’ DOWN THE COAST WITH A HEAVY LOAD
. . . When the coast is clear I might just call you up, if I ever get the nerve . . .
How it blends down the coast,............. when the coast is clear.
Would love to play with this in Suno, but only with your permission.
Love the guitars.
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I somehow overlooked this until now.
Enjoyed the song.
Thematically, along with the buoyancy of it, made me recall "I Know You're Out There Somewhere," by the Moody Blues.
Please keep posting. I look forward to hearing your songs.
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Like this a lot....real nice production and great vocal...love the line...We were thick as thieves . . . until you stole my heart...that's good writing
Steve
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Beautifully done, great story line, very pro production sound...and the cherry on top...what a great voice! Might want to post the lyrics next time always fun to read the lines.
Nearer clearer rear view mirror, very catchy
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Hey, great to see you here. I like this song. It's really catchy. You have great voice which is a big part of this song. No crits at all from me. A great track :)
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Hi folks . . . first post, go gentle. :D
This is a song I wrote a few years back, and just recently re-recorded it . . . mostly bumped up the tempo and sang it again, re-did the guitars. It's part of a collection of songs I like to refer to as "Lost Highway"
https://soundcloud.com/epicdreamery/rear-view-mirror