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The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 10:54:54 am


Title: Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 02:55:04 pm
I like both versions.
As you said, they have the same bones.

As you also said, SUNO is so highly manicured that, it sounds like pros in a studio with a tier-one engineer.

Pretty song.

Thank you so much for listening!!!
Title: Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: LAWHON on June 17, 2026, 02:52:47 pm
I like both versions.
As you said, they have the same bones.

As you also said, SUNO is so highly manicured that, it sounds like pros in a studio with a tier-one engineer.

Pretty song.
Title: Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 02:19:00 pm


My actual voice is the soundclick version. but thanks for thinking I have that good of a voice! lol
Hmm sounds very similar to the Soundclick version. If I understand correctly Suno has some new feature that will mimic your actual voice, thought maybe that's what you were using.  Just curious trying to learn.
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That's very kewl.  the very first demo I uploaded actually did mimic my voice almost perfectly!
Title: Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: Stone Flowers on June 17, 2026, 12:45:02 pm


My actual voice is the soundclick version. but thanks for thinking I have that good of a voice! lol
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Hmm sounds very similar to the Soundclick version. If I understand correctly Suno has some new feature that will mimic your actual voice, thought maybe that's what you were using.  Just curious trying to learn.
Title: Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 12:34:37 pm
Pretty profound difference to the upside from Suno.  But I'm curious is that your actual voice on the Suno version?


My actual voice is the soundclick version. but thanks for thinking I have that good of a voice! lol
Title: Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: Stone Flowers on June 17, 2026, 12:05:03 pm
Pretty profound difference to the upside from Suno.  But I'm curious is that your actual voice on the Suno version?
Title: Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: billdraper on June 17, 2026, 11:32:33 am
Good use of suno as demo, complete with original artist recording! Alway liked this one, glad to add to my suno Kay-Lynn playlist. :D
Bill
Title: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
Post by: redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 10:54:54 am
Here is my silly guitar vocal which I would be embarrassed to pitch to anyone.

https://soundclick.com/song/6516653

And here is the suno version and it followed my song perfectly.

https://suno.com/s/4BrDatoqu9QHMPbH

[Verse 1]
In a heartbeat, in a teardrop
In a single moment in time
There's a light that goes on and
Baby you were mine
'Cause you shined love into my life I was blind
But now I see the light and it's all because of you
And one little spark, baby, I'm out of the dark

[Verse 2]
It was cold there, I don't know where
I would be right now
But you found me, wrapped around me
I still don't know how
You shined love into my life I was blind
But now I see the light and it's all because of you
And one little spark, baby, I'm out of the dark

[Verse 3]
You believed me, you could see me
When everyone else disappeared
It's amazing, must be crazy
I finally saw through the tears
When you shined love into my life I was blind
But now I see the light and it's all because of you
It's all because of you
It's all because of you
And one little spark, baby, I'm out of the dark


((((((((((((( I think it needs a bridge???))))))))))))))))))


So, I'm not cheating or having AI write the song for me, it's just a better voice.  What say you all?