Starfish Songwriters

The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: rpirone on June 18, 2026, 09:30:16 am

Title: Re: The Heart Remembers
Post by: rpirone on June 23, 2026, 10:25:31 am

Thanks for checking this out. The lyric you pointed out was a last minute rewrite. Glad I trusted my instinct on that one.

Title: Re: The Heart Remembers
Post by: pistol on June 18, 2026, 09:30:29 pm

I really like this tune-vocals, music, and lyrics all work well together. The line ‘Sometimes your lips smile but your eyes don’t’ really stood out to me, and I found myself wanting more of that kind of imagery throughout the song. It made the emotion feel more immediate and visual. I think the song could be even stronger if it leaned a bit more into those kinds of specific, observational moments alongside the more general emotional lines.  Again, I really enjoyed listening.  :)

Title: The Heart Remembers
Post by: rpirone on June 18, 2026, 09:30:16 am

Just got this demo back from my producer/co-writer Gerry Peters. Feedback is welcomed and appreciated.

https://soundclick.com/song/15272922