Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Stone Flowers on July 04, 2026, 08:07:23 am
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Enjoyed it Stone.
Tnx for tuning in amigo
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Enjoyed it Stone.
IMO...well written.
"And the light of grey" is a delightfully turned phrase.
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Don't know what it's like these days where ya'll are at but around here..."the traffic is insane and politics are fueling fights". Here's my fix... my composition and voice, no AI involved. Happy 250!
https://youtu.be/VQdY_BRU_iE?si=QsHYQJq4gYVihEFX
I know what you’re thinking, I’m thinking it too
No use denying, this world is full of fools
I’m tensed up and tangled, when I watch the news
So I take a big deep breath, and cry out a tune yeah
Chorus
I’ll be singing soon, I’ll be singing soon
Early in the morning, and in the light of the moon
Singing is like magic, it makes me feel immune
So come on and sing it with me
Yeah we’ll be singing soon
The light of day hit’s me, early in the morning
And the light of grey creeps, into my mind
Somebody shot somebody, late last night
The traffic is insane, and politics are fueling fights
I’ve got make it to work, and earn my pay
You and I don’t need liquor, to help us on our way
There’s something better out there, ain’t no cost to you
It’ll brighten up your face, heal up your wounds
Yeah we’ll be singing soon, we’ll be singing soon
All the morning long, and in the light of the moon
Singing is like magic, it makes us feel immune
So come and sing it with me
Yeah we’ll be singing soon
Break
Bridge
There’s a pain in my shoulder
There’s a pain up in my neck
The temperature is rising, and that ain’t cool
I’m laid up the flu why’s life got to be so cruel
Only one thing I know, can break the fever’s
mood
Well I’ll be singing soon, you’ll be singing too
From early in the morning, until the light of the moon
Singing is like magic, it makes us feel immune
So come and sing it with me
Yeah we’ll be singing soon
Outro