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The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: russdewolfe@gmail.com on March 28, 2026, 11:09:30 pm


Title: Re: Rock 80s style- Twisted Mind
Post by: russdewolfe@gmail.com on March 29, 2026, 10:40:53 pm
I was just a little girl you see
Unprotected from what life gave me
You saw a place to satisfy your selfish way
Taking my innocence with no shame
Never knowing there would come a day
When I would have to say

That this girl can't take the pain
This woman can't take the blame
Can't take the years of shame
Washing over me
Can't spend all of my time
Living with this twisted mind

Well I've prayed and I've grown strong
Realizing what you did was wrong
God told me to ignore all the rules
Forgetting weakness nobody's fool

So look out man, cuz here's the plan
I'm taking this in my hands
Put you in your place
So no one sees your face
In their dreams every night
Wondering why they didn't fight.

Because this girl can't take the pain
This woman can't take the blame
Can't take the years of shame
Washing over me
Can't spend all of my time
Living with this twisted mind

Call me a sinner, call me a ****
Tell me your coming back for more
I'll be waiting for you right here
My 45 pressed against your ear
Now you tell me who's in charge
Lookin down the barrel of a gun
Tell me how your living large
Tell me how your having fun

You had your chance to leave
You knew it was wrong
So get up off your knees
And show me your still strong

And you'll see
That this girl can't take the pain
This woman can't take the blame
Can't take the years of shame
Washing over me
Can't spend all of my time
Living with this twisted mind

Wake up to the sound of
Police knocking on the door
Don't know what came over me
Blood on my hands, could it be
it's all worth it to make them see

That this girl can't take the pain
This woman can't take the blame
Can't take the years of shame
Washing over me
Can't spend all of my time
Living with this twisted mind


Title: Re: Rock 80s style- Twisted Mind
Post by: Marsha on March 29, 2026, 02:25:19 pm
Can you please post the lyrics, if you don't mind?  It helps us all follow along.

The track sounds good so far.
Title: Rock 80s style- Twisted Mind
Post by: russdewolfe@gmail.com on March 28, 2026, 11:09:30 pm
Song about a sexually abused now woman getting revenge on her purpotraitor
https://open.spotify.com/track/17JbMPBdEe8sDh4IXlZljL?si=CWrFZz9wQXyl70UNOcUz0w