Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Shelleyanne on April 01, 2026, 10:03:58 pm
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The line that sticks in my ear is "Everybody but you". Nice song, very laid back.
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lol, my husband said the same thing. I’m just experimenting :)
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This is sweet... I read the lyrics before listening... For some reason I thought it would be a female singer... ;)
Good Luck
Tex
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Okay, one more then I swear I’ll take a break.
https://suno.com/s/eJx8nNjkyh9H97zu
Everybody Knew
Midnight and I’m climbing out my window
Gonna meet you at the beach
Then who knows
Where we’ll be
I’m with you and you’re with me
You stole my heart and I stole your first kiss
I swear I’ve never known
Anything like this
It’s all brand new
You’re with me and I’m with you
Everybody knew that summer was forever
Nobody heard the warning of September
Creeping in
On a cool sweet wind
Everybody knew we’re meant to be together
Everybody knew
Everybody but you
When summer ends, the sun fades away
Air turns cool at the end of the day
But stars keep their shine
I’m still yours if you’re still mine
If I’d of known it would end like this
I’d of held on to every kiss
I’d remember all those hours
You’re still mine if I’m still yours
Rolling through our sweet summer bliss
Promises fell out of your lips
Like a breeze passing through
You’re for me and I’m for you
You got a car and I got a memory
I don’t know how you could forget me
So easily
When I’m for you and you’re for me
Everybody knew that summer was forever
Nobody heard the warning of September
Creeping in
On a cool sweet wind
Everybody knew we’re meant to be together
Everybody knew
Everybody but you
Midnight and I’m climbing out my window
Gonna meet you at the beach
Then who knows
Where we’ll be
As always, feedback welcome :)