Starfish Songwriters

The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: redwriter1 on April 06, 2026, 01:49:40 pm

Title: Re: That's Where You Were (cus of Curtis Flint song)
Post by: Elvis Nash on April 07, 2026, 09:01:19 am

Actually the way you phrased it. I think it works 

Title: Re: That's Where You Were (cus of Curtis Flint song)
Post by: Elvis Nash on April 06, 2026, 11:12:09 pm

I see nothing wrong with it , fire flies is a bit cliche , but this looks good

Title: That's Where You Were (cus of Curtis Flint song)
Post by: redwriter1 on April 06, 2026, 01:49:40 pm

Wrote this awhile ago about my co-writing going back to England.


https://soundclick.com/song/15177837

[Verse 1]
I'm wading through this muddy creek
Barefoot with my radio
Wind is warm, water's cold
the song is just an echo
The sun is hanging on to the sky
And I'm trying not to cry

[Chorus]
'Cause that's where you were
The last time I saw you
And that's where I want you to be right now
How do I learn to live without you?
When everywhere I turn
That's where you were

[Verse 2]
Sitting on my old back porch
Fireflies are dancing
Doing just what they do best
Trying to find romance and the sun is hanging on to the sky
And I'm wishing I could fly

[Chorus]
'Cause that's where you were
The last time I saw you
And that's where I want you to be right now
How do I learn to live without you?
When everywhere I turn
That's where you were

[Bridge]
I know that you won't come back
I'm dreaming but it's just that feeling that you're still here
[Verse 3]
the daffodils are  in the yard
Right where you planted them
I added tulips late this fall
And took a chance that the sun would keep them alive
And somehow we'd  both survive

[Chorus]
'Cause that's where you were
The last time I saw you
And that's where I want you to be right now
How do I learn to live without you?
When everywhere I turn
Everywhere I turn


That's where you were
The last time I saw you
And that's where I want you to be right now