Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Elvis Nash on April 12, 2026, 12:49:46 pm
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Yeah, that's what I"m still working on.............. Say too much, say too little, it's a fine line.
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People care about that topic , it's a big problem Kay-lynn. Tuff to approach it, maybe you could dance around being molested by using something not so abrupt but still get it
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ha ha ha , yeah I take Zelle
You cost me 600.00 , Tracks being made
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Since I talked you into doing a demo for this one, do I have to pay for it? :)
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Amazing lyric you have there. I guess we all have scars but nobody wants to show them off, why would we?
Inspiring another writer to write something is a huge compliment, and I can see what you're saying.
You're very kind to listen so carefully. I just hope I'm not whining about something nobody cares about.
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https://suno.com/song/aeffaa37-61fa-42c6-a2f4-8935564ad6a8
Verse 1
I’ve slept in trucks and borrowed time
Watched good things fall apart
Shook hands with trouble more than once
Let it leave its mark
I ain’t proud of every mile
But I made it this far
Yeah the truth don’t shine like diamonds…
It looks more like scars
Chorus
Show ’em your scars
Don’t hide where you’ve been
Every crack in your armor
Is where you learned to bend
You don’t get this strong
From easy and safe
You get it from livin’
And the hell that you faced
Yeah don’t polish the story
Don’t cover the hard
If you wanna be real…
Show ’em your scars
Verse 2
I’ve lost a few and burned a few
And let some good ones go
Said things I can’t take back
Still carry what I know
I’ve had nights I didn’t think
I’d see another dawn
But the sun don’t care about your past
It just keeps movin’ on
Chorus
Show ’em your scars
Don’t hide where you’ve been
Every crack in your armor
Is where you learned to bend
You don’t get this strong
From easy and safe
You get it from livin’
And the hell that you faced
Yeah don’t polish the story
Don’t cover the hard
If you wanna be real…
Show ’em your scars
Bridge (Outlaw spoken/half-sung)
Everybody wants the legend
Nobody wants the fight
But you don’t earn your name
Without losin’ a few nights
Final Chorus (Lifted)
Show ’em your scars
Let ’em see who you are
Every wrong turn you took
Every busted guitar
You don’t get this voice
From livin’ too clean
You get it from heartbreak
And broken dreams
Yeah the truth ain’t pretty
But it hits you hard
If you ain’t afraid…
Show em
Show em
Show em your scars
your the reason I wrote this song Kay-Lynn , I was thinking on whats real like being molested