Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Elvis Nash on April 30, 2026, 08:13:36 am
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ha ha ha it happens. That'll be not suitable for kids and no ads on this on YouTube. You're not selling soap for us. Did that old man drop the F bomb ? I believe he did. I'm not really sure how that works on YouTube dropping the F bomb . Have to look into it more. You can just not monetized , Well see if I want cut this
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I've felt like saying that myself once or twice. >:(
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https://suno.com/song/99388507-d584-4ac9-9039-eb3041f61c8b
V1
Woke up with a list and a head full of plans
Gonna straighten this life with my own two hands
But the wheels fell off ‘fore I hit noon
Now I’m drinkin’ coffee with a busted tune
Tried to pray it straight, tried to drink it numb
Tried to outrun things I can’t outrun
Every road I take just circles back
To the same old hole and a deeper crack
Ch
If you can’t fix it, **** it, let it roll on by
Ain’t every broken thing needs a reason why
Some fires burn ‘til there’s nothin’ left
Some hearts don’t beat, they just hold their breath
Yeah I fought like hell but I finally quit
If you can’t fix it… **** it
V2
She said “you could change if you tried real hard”
I just laughed and shuffled a broken deck of cards
Every promise I made was a worn-out lie
With a truth underneath I can’t deny
There’s a peace in losin’ what you can’t save
Like a sinner layin’ in a shallow grave
Ain’t redemption waitin’ on every street
Sometimes defeat’s just admit defeat
Ch
If you can’t fix it, **** it, let it roll on by
Ain’t every broken thing needs a reason why
Some fires burn ‘til there’s nothin’ left
Some hearts don’t beat, they just hold their breath
Yeah I fought like hell but I finally quit
If you can’t fix it… **** it
Bridge (short, spoken feel)
Ain’t wisdom… it’s just wearin’ out
Last Ch (lift)
If you can’t fix it, **** it, let it drift away
I been holdin’ on past my last good day
Some roads end where they always did
Some truths hurt more than they ever hid
Yeah I gave this world every ounce I get
If you can’t fix it… **** it