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The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: whengen on May 04, 2026, 07:31:52 pm

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 02:34:56 am

Thanks Elvis :)

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 01:48:58 am

That is right in the pocket of revelations , and one scary thing to worry about along with everything else we have to worry about like being human

Sounds good Bill

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: whengen on May 04, 2026, 09:12:13 pm

Thanks Sid :)

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: sid shovel on May 04, 2026, 09:07:23 pm

I've learnt from experience to read the lyrics through a couple of times before listening.
I know the music and vocals will be something else and I'll be drawn away from the story.
Good job I did, the technical work that must have gone into this production is awesome.
I learn a lot of prompting techniques from your work Bill, they really are a goldmine of tips and tricks.
Well done, excellent piece of work.
Sid

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: whengen on May 04, 2026, 08:15:41 pm

Thanks, I really appreciate it. that took a lot of effort. I think I burnt about 200 credits just to get that sound. :)

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: redwriter1 on May 04, 2026, 08:11:54 pm

Wow.................. that literally sounds like a spooky soundtrack to a sci-fi movie......... chilling frankly!

(shivers)

I can't write like that, but how did you get Suno to do that???

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: whengen on May 04, 2026, 07:42:18 pm

Thanks Tex :)

Title: Re: Lambs Wrath
Post by: Tex on May 04, 2026, 07:39:02 pm

Hi Bill,

You've got a way with these kind of story's, Sounds pretty good to me.

Title: Lambs Wrath
Post by: whengen on May 04, 2026, 07:31:52 pm

Words - Me; Music - Suno

https://suno.com/s/nCzOAAFHoqCzwnKp

[Verse 1]
Last night I had a dream I was dancing
In a field with seven lambs of pure white
In a ritualistic rhythmic heavenly swirl
Shattering seals bearing impending plight

[Chorus]
Sounds of thunder shattering still night air
(The moon becomes blood, the sun raven's hair)
Heralding forth the wrath of the almighty lamb
(Casting judgment on sinners and the damned)

[Verse 2]
My dear, in my dream, I've witnessed
The four horsemen of the apocalypse
Bring pain and despair upon the earth
And cast masses into the fiery abyss

[Chorus]
Sounds of thunder shattering still night air
(The moon becomes blood, the sun raven's hair)
Heralding forth the wrath of the almighty lamb
(Casting judgment on sinners and the damned)

[Verse 3]
My love, I dreamt of standing at the alter
And witnessing the wailing of persecuted souls
Slain for standing devout to the sacred word,
God's words, as written in the holy scrolls

[Chorus]
Sounds of thunder shattering still night air
(The moon becomes blood, the sun raven's hair)
Heralding forth the wrath of the almighty lamb
(Casting judgment on sinners and the damned)

[Bridge]
My beloved, my most troubling dream of all,
The horrors witnessed before my very eyes
I saw mountains crumble into boiling seas
Heavens blacken as stars fall from the skies

[Outro]
My darling, Last night I heard a voice speak
(Who amongst the masses shall be able to stand)
For the day of judgement has come upon us
(And be one of the meek who inherits the land)