Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 01:46:53 am
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Or that F bomb song , Maybe its creates some buzz , I'm not sure. Do I want the stress on it ? Will see
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ah ha.... someone is name dropping!! Good for you! LOL
Like the song says "we've all had **** that hit the fan, get knocked down and then run over again".
Glad you're here!
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You lived with a crazy truck driver.......... oh man... write that song!!!
it was right next to a guitar shop , Where the Judds hung out
Some good years , Play music all day, life was simple and cheap rent. Not sure theres a adjective strong enough to describe what I'm going thru now
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You lived with a crazy truck driver.......... oh man... write that song!!!
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I lived in a junk yard in a trailer for 10 years with a crazy truck driver , actually he wasn't . He said you wait China will be taken over , he was right . He said that all the time . I might cut it , it's hard to judge which one to take to studios and track out . Thanks
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Good to catch up again here. This is everything I've come to expect from you. I'd to hear this one live, but as an Elvis/AI production it works great. No crits from me.. Love it. :)
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I had a co-worker with this sentiment - If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at /You’re gonna hate the next one - and he said it in a slow southern drawl too, which made it even funnier
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Actually made me laugh outloud...........!! Great job.
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Nice Elvis,
reminds me of my wife's driving, someone gets behind her to close and she slows down. :)
Yeah, go at your own speed.
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https://suno.com/song/cd74a8c1-ca3b-4c71-b8db-a204a0bc5fbe
Verse 1
She’s tappin’ on the dashboard, sayin’ “Why you movin’ slow?”
Boss blowin’ up my phone like I ain’t already know
Everybody’s got a clock they’re tryin’ to strap on me
But I ain’t built for chains, I ain’t runnin’ on their speed
Pre-Chorus
They can honk, they can shout, they can wave me on through
But I don’t shift gears just to satisfy you
Chorus
If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at
You’re gonna hate the next one
I ain’t racin’ your clock, I ain’t chasin’ your track
I burn when the fuse gets done
You can push, you can pull, you can try to steer me
But I don’t bend, I don’t run
If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at
You’re gonna hate the next one
Verse 2
Girlfriend talkin’ timelines, sayin’ “Where’s this goin’ to?”
Like love’s a damn schedule I’m supposed to follow through
Boss man wants it yesterday, calls it “just a tweak”
But I ain’t sellin’ hours that I ain’t got to keep
Pre-Chorus
Everybody’s rushin’ like the end’s comin’ soon
I’m sittin’ on the porch, just hummin’ my tune
Chorus
If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at
You’re gonna hate the next one
I ain’t racin’ your clock, I ain’t chasin’ your track
I burn when the fuse gets done
You can push, you can pull, you can try to steer me
But I don’t bend, I don’t run
If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at
You’re gonna hate the next one
Bridge
I ain’t late… I just ain’t early for the wrong life
You call it delay—I call it doin’ it right
Final Chorus (lifted)
If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at
You’re gonna hate the next one
Might slow it down more just to prove my point
Yeah, I ain’t your loaded gun
You can stomp your feet, say I’m fallin’ behind
But I ain’t chasin’ anyone
If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at
You’re gonna hate the next one
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Yeah… take your time or leave mine alone