Starfish Songwriters

The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 09:54:02 am

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: whengen on May 06, 2026, 12:14:57 am

next song, I'll provide the cliff notes :)

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 10:05:29 pm

ha ha ha , I'm out in space alright . Well keep writing songs about life , confuse people. 1000 free plugins , well there ya go

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 09:53:29 pm

time must move much slower for you, which means you are out in space, as I have it at 7:52 and right now,i'm looking at the 1,000s of plugins that I was able to get for free :)

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 09:44:42 pm

Well not today , it's 7pm . How about tomorrow at that crack of dawn when the rooster crows , next door to me . You sure are noisy , Kinda macho looking also

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 09:41:52 pm

you mean in the present? :)

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 09:39:51 pm

ok well there ya go , a goal to pursue in the future. Tik Tok Tik Tok , Ignore ASAP , I hate when they say that. 

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 04:34:51 pm

I'm not going to do that until I can monetize them. i'm working on getting up to speed on logic pro and going to produce my own. but thanks for the suggestion :)

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 04:26:11 pm

I still think all of you should create a Youtube channel and create shorts to promote them
I see these AI songs all the time on YouTube. thats a short , that leads to main vid

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/qoNqFDHL3eE


it takes little effort to set them up , And you'll get the listens , at least some , If you did not wanna be heard , you never would have started writing songs , Were all hams. I kinda doubt anyone cares if its a AI song anymore

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 01:17:04 pm

Thanks Tex :)

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: Tex on May 05, 2026, 12:45:34 pm

Very nice and easy to listen to Bill.  :)

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 11:19:36 am

Thanks Chris, just a matter of playing around and seeing what sounds good. not exactly what I was going for, but it's close :)

Title: Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: ChrisPrice on May 05, 2026, 11:13:46 am

This is remarkable. It could easily be featured in a film - James Bond even? You are so adventurous with the arrangements. There's an almost classical feel to the instrumentation. This is clever. :)

Title: Court of the Crimson Crows
Post by: whengen on May 05, 2026, 09:54:02 am

Words Me; Music - Suno

https://suno.com/s/qbiOXZlQw9j0KuBj

[Intro]
You stand in judgement before the court
Of the crimson crows, what say you
You say I know of what I've done
My questions questioned, what say you

[Chorus]
A swirling swarm of crimson reds
And ashen whites murders the night
Dancing sensually with druids
The sun embracing moon blends fluid

[Verse 1]
Standing in a forest of doors locked
A key is behind faceless spinning clocks
Knocking without answers, what say you

[Chorus]
A swirling swarm of crimson reds
And ashen whites murders the night
Dancing sensually with druids
The sun embracing moon blends fluid

[Verse 2]
Whirling sullen crows goes around
Feathered rain stains the ground
Molting muffling my deciding mind

[Chorus]
A swirling swarm of crimson reds
And ashen whites murders the night
Dancing sensually with druids
The sun embracing moon blends fluid

[Outro]
Why am I here? (Because you are)
Where is here? (Where you are)
I'm not anywhere, (Yes you are)
You're not being clear, (Aren't we?)