Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: ChrisPrice on May 05, 2026, 10:43:41 am
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both. it seems. but again, could be me. these speakers on my laptop aren't the best
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Wow, for somebody whose 72 (I think i've seen that in a post), you still have a great quality to your voice. the guitars seemed a bit muffled but it could be my speakers.
Thank you. Yup,turned 72 the other day. I intend to keep going till I can't. Just got back from band practice! I'll check out the guitars - do you mean the solo or the rhythm?
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I'm a bit more of a country boy.. but you have yourself a good song here.
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Man I'm jealous I've never been to Paris , Only 3rd world countries , Not sure why that is
Thats sounds great , still rocking and rolling at 72 , Paul Ankas still doing it at 84 , Best do music or die from being serious. DOA , Died from thinking life was not a joke. Buried at sea for some reason .Maybe he had an aquarium .Was he's ex wife there ? Yup she's the one who pushed him over board . On Titanic 3 right ? Yes just built. What happened to Titanic 2 , it sank like the first one
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Wow, for somebody whose 72 (I think i've seen that in a post), you still have a great quality to your voice. the guitars seemed a bit muffled but it could be my speakers.
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Yes - it was completed on May 3rd!! :)
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This is a really catchy song..
Is this a recent recording?
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My first song on this forum. It was loosely inspired by a long weekend in Paris with my daughter. Hope I've done this right.
Métropolitain
Words and music written and performed by Chris Price ©2026
Métropolitain (https://soundcloud.com/chris-price-824458122/metropolitain?si=e6bbbbbb5aeb4cdcb74c8d3c1808adec&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing)
I’m heading south again to the boulevard Margeurite de Rochechouart
I’m seeing an old new friend, she live so near but never go that far
Up and down the metro line, Haute cuisine and drink fine wine
Camembert demi baguette, her gallic shrug you can’t forget
It was love on Line 2...of the Métropolitain Line
She wore the t-shirt and beret, conquered me in every way
Broken English and broken heart, spit me out I have no say
Up and down the metro line, Haute cuisine and drink fine wine
Camembert and French baguette, the gallic shrug you can’t forget
It was love on Line 2…
With a sophisticated, cosmopolitan liberal mind and her psychedelic streak
Turn me inside out with all her streetwise and funky debonair chique
I’m heading south again to the boulevard Margeurite de Rochechouart
I’m seeing an old new friend, she live so near but never go that far
Up and down the metro line, Haute cuisine and drink fine wine
Camembert and French baguette, her gallic shrug you can’t forget
Smoking gauloises cigarettes, salade nicoise and lipstick wet
Passion like I never knew, love me till I’m black n blue
It was love on Line 2