Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 07:09:44 pm
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That could work to record . 4s a tad long , but it stays locked in. Who could I lie to make more money to cut this
Oh what a wicked web we weave . Well she did , I'm innocent. Yes you need this job done next week , I gave you the best deal of century . Ignore pinocchio in the corner
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Damn Elvis, this is good. :o
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Catchy line - Let’s see who’s the darker angel when the truth comes out
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https://suno.com/song/60b58e3f-0ac4-47de-ae87-0be270c6b65f
Verse 1
She walked in like trouble dressed up in black
Smile like a switchblade hid behind her back
Everybody warned me “boy don’t play that game”
But broken souls only listen to the rain
She knew every shortcut straight through my head
Every ghost I buried, every lie I said
Yeah she danced with demons, no doubt about it
But I ain’t the kind of man that scares easy now
Chorus
Let’s see who’s the darker angel when the truth comes out
When the whiskey quits talking and the lights burn out
You can point at my sins, baby I’ll point at yours
We both got footprints headed straight through hell’s door
You wear your halo tilted, I wear mine shot through
But one of us still knows what loyalty can do
Yeah the devil keeps score when the shadows tangle
Let’s see who’s the darker angel
Verse 2
She could start a wildfire with a goodbye kiss
Leave a man half ruined and still call it bliss
I was holding the line trying not to fall
While she treated hearts like wrecking balls
But I stayed when the whole town turned away
Took the hit, paid the tab, carried all the blame
Yeah I got scars that’d make a preacher cuss
But I never left people who depended on us
Chorus
Let’s see who’s the darker angel when the truth comes out
When the whiskey quits talking and the lights burn out
You can point at my sins, baby I’ll point at yours
We both got footprints headed straight through hell’s door
You wear your halo tilted, I wear mine shot through
But one of us still knows what loyalty can do
Yeah the devil keeps score when the shadows tangle
Let’s see who’s the darker angel
Bridge
Ain’t no saints leaning on a bar at 2AM
Just survivors trying to outrun where they’ve been
And if heaven’s got a blacklist with my name
At least I never played innocent in the flames
Final Chorus
Let’s see who’s the darker angel when the truth comes out
When the last door closes and there’s nobody around
Yeah I raised some hell but I carried my own
Never sold my soul just to feel less alone
You can judge this outlaw from the outside angle
But I loved hard enough to survive the damage
When the smoke finally clears from the danger
Let’s see who’s the darker angel