Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: guest42 on May 06, 2026, 01:22:03 pm
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its the school of George Carlin song manual. You people are all diseased , I miss that guy
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Either laugh or cry. You write truth in words.
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Well if you laugh at them , its worse , Well were all drama queens once in awhile but not 24 hours a day like some. I'm going thur a bad divorce , Really try 3 , Your going to turn into George Carlin , They kinda just look at you. Did you find a new one yet ? Well no should I , yeah . Go on the hunt , immediately. Kinda how it is in reality , You talk to people , usually its a laugh a minute ,
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Funny story, I asked my sister before she passed, If I was a drama queen growing up. without a beat, she immediately replied - Yah think :D :D :D
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Thats it Drama queens , What they don't realize , Their funnier than Laurel And Hardy
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I like the sly giggle at the beginning :)..
This sounds like a song Elvis would write, I"m only saying that is because he wrote it, ;) ;D
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This one sounds good, and you even got to put yourself in it too.
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https://suno.com/song/b9c8a3d5-68c3-44f4-a1d5-a7897ecca3dc
Verse 1
She slammed that screen door like a prime-time scene
Mascara running like a bad movie queen
Neighbor peeking through the curtains again
Like my whole damn life’s late-night CNN
Boss man yelling ‘bout the clock on the wall
While his third wife’s halfway cleaning him out
Everybody’s acting like the world’s on fire
I’m just trying to keep four bald tires
Chorus
Drama queens and Comedy Central
Everybody breaking down sentimental
One side crying, one side loud
Whole damn circus drawing a crowd
I light another cigarette slow and gentle
Watching heartbreak go full instrumental
These days truth feels accidental
Living somewhere between
Drama queens and Comedy Central
Verse 2
Girl said “Elvis, you don’t ever change”
I said “Neither does a runaway train”
Preacher screaming through a microphone
Probably fighting demons of his own
News man selling fear by the pound
Laugh track rolling while the ship goes down
Half these people need a front-row seat
Just to watch two strangers bleed
Chorus
Drama queens and Comedy Central
Everybody breaking down sentimental
One side crying, one side loud
Whole damn circus drawing a crowd
I light another cigarette slow and gentle
Watching heartbreak go full instrumental
These days truth feels accidental
Living somewhere between
Drama queens and Comedy Central
Bridge
Some laugh to hide it
Some scream to survive it
Some drink all night just to quiet the noise
Me—I write songs
For the broken and wrong
Trying to turn bad luck into a voice
Final Chorus
Drama queens and Comedy Central
Yeah the whole world’s getting existential
Fake smiles underneath cheap lights
Everybody filming everybody’s fights
Still I keep this outlaw soul together
Rusty faith and stormy weather
If life’s a joke then hell, whatever
I’ll keep laughing somewhere between
Drama queens and Comedy Central
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Yeah somewhere between heartbreak… and punchlines.