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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Don’t Talk to Me Like That
« on: April 16, 2026, 05:25:44 pm »
Thanks Tex, always appreciate feedback!  I’ll play with it a bit, see what works  :)

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Don’t Talk to Me Like That
« on: April 15, 2026, 12:52:51 am »
https://suno.com/s/4B59WyvGKgYDMj45


If you say you miss me
I might take your hand
If you say you’re sorry
I’ll say I understand

If you say there’s no one else like me
I’ll take you back
I don’t want to hear it
Don’t talk to me like that

Chorus
Tell me I misunderstood
Lay down all your charm
Tell me you still love me
And I’ll fall into your arms

Tell me no one knows you like I do
I’ll take you back
I can’t stand to hear it
Don’t talk to me like that

Bridge
When I close my eyes I hear your voice
You’re sorry but you had to make a choice
You’ve said your piece, I know what I heard
Not another smile, not another word

Chorus
Tell me I misunderstood
Lay down all your charm
Tell me you still love me
I might fall into your arms

Tell me no one loves you like I do
I’ll take you back
Please don’t let me hear it
You can’t talk to me like that

It’s too late to change your mind
It’s too late to walk it back
I don’t want to hear it
You can’t talk to me like that

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Everybody Knew
« on: April 01, 2026, 11:16:52 pm »
lol, my husband said the same thing. I’m just experimenting  :)

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Everybody Knew
« on: April 01, 2026, 10:03:58 pm »
Okay, one more then I swear I’ll take a break. 

https://suno.com/s/eJx8nNjkyh9H97zu

Everybody Knew

Midnight and I’m climbing out my window
Gonna meet you at the beach
Then who knows
Where we’ll be
I’m with you and you’re with me

You stole my heart and I stole your first kiss
I swear I’ve never known
Anything like this
It’s all brand new
You’re with me and I’m with you

Everybody knew that summer was forever
Nobody heard the warning of September
Creeping in
On a cool sweet wind
Everybody knew we’re meant to be together
Everybody knew
Everybody but you

When summer ends, the sun fades away
Air turns cool at the end of the day
But stars keep their shine
I’m still yours if you’re still mine

If I’d of known it would end like this
I’d of held on to every kiss
I’d remember all those hours
You’re still mine if I’m still yours

Rolling through our sweet summer bliss
Promises fell out of your lips
Like a breeze passing through
You’re for me and I’m for you

You got a car and I got a memory
I don’t know how you could forget me
So easily
When I’m for you and you’re for me

Everybody knew that summer was forever
Nobody heard the warning of September
Creeping in
On a cool sweet wind
Everybody knew we’re meant to be together
Everybody knew
Everybody but you

Midnight and I’m climbing out my window
Gonna meet you at the beach
Then who knows
Where we’ll be


As always, feedback welcome :)

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: I Know What’s True
« on: April 01, 2026, 02:46:51 pm »
I like the country vibe.  I played a little more, trying to get it more to how it sounds in my head.  This isn’t quite there but closer. Lmk!

https://suno.com/s/7j8zIDOBi0kkMHX4

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: I Know What’s True
« on: April 01, 2026, 11:15:07 am »
Yeah it didn’t turn out like I hoped, but I’m still learning Suno.  Can’t seem to tweak it.  You’re welcome to play if you’d like!

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / I Know What’s True
« on: March 31, 2026, 12:51:03 am »
https://suno.com/s/jrVqzCCWD4ouNJcZ

Evening all, I wrote these lyrics a few months ago, and am just learning to play with Suno.  I’m not 100% on the results I got, but since it’s the lyrics I want to showcase…. Well, let me know what you think.  Here are the lyrics for your review as well:

I Know What’s True

It’s okay
I just thought I heard you
Maybe call my name
But I can see that you have plans
And I don’t mean to just step in
So it’s okay
I’ll step back and fade away again

I know what’s true
I hear what I want to hear
And mostly, I hear you
Telling me you want me there
Your hands tucked tightly in my hair
Your mouth on mine
My heartbeat, black and blue
I hear what I want hear
I only hear what I want to hear
With you

Don’t be sad
I just thought I saw you
Reaching for my hand
But you’ve been very clear and
You know, I understand
So don’t be sad
I’ll fade away just like we never planned

I know what’s true
I see what I want to see
And mostly, I see you
Smiling down into my face
Leaning into my embrace
Your eyes so wide
My heartbeat, black and blue
I see what I want to see
I only see what I want to see
With you

It’s all right
I just know I want to be
With you tonight
But my timing is all wrong
And I can’t ever get it right
But it’s all right
I’ll fade away just like the evening light

I know what’s true
I know what I want to know
I just don’t know you
Don’t know the slide of your sweet skin
Where do you start
And I begin
My poor heartbeat, so black and blue
I know what I want to know
I only know what I want to know
With you

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / But I Do
« on: March 27, 2026, 12:20:26 pm »
https://suno.com/s/yZPj8yU6O7ZBqDCv

Good Morning!  My first venture in this arena. “But I Do,”. Lyrics by myself, redwriter1 was kind enough to create the music/vocals with Suno and I was blown away by the results (even though I was sceptical of AI at first).

LMK what you think!

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Lyrics for Review/Critique / Re: First post of lyric!
« on: March 26, 2026, 11:02:31 pm »
So happy with this!  Was actually amazed at how good it came out.

Thank you!

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Lyrics for Review/Critique / Re: First post of lyric!
« on: March 26, 2026, 08:35:35 pm »
Definitely a pop/country vibe I think

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Lyrics for Review/Critique / Re: First post of lyric!
« on: March 26, 2026, 07:36:10 pm »
This is a great perspective. Honestly, I could use it just to generate some interest in the lyrics right?  Doesn’t have to be the final version of the song.
Thank you, I’m going to look into that.  If someone wants to run it through, that would be cool too.

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Lyrics for Review/Critique / Re: First post of lyric!
« on: March 26, 2026, 05:16:09 pm »
Suno wouldn’t be my first choice.  I’m a boomer and suspicious of technology lol.  Would prefer to work with a musician to create something.

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Lyrics for Review/Critique / Re: First post of lyric!
« on: March 26, 2026, 12:14:48 pm »
I can hear it in my head, but not being a musician or singer, can’t really communicate it. It’s a uptempo beat, kinda poppy which is different from what I usually wry, which is more folksy.

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Lyrics for Review/Critique / First post of lyric!
« on: March 25, 2026, 11:50:37 pm »
Please be honest  :)

But I do
It’s every day
And it’s all the time
Wishing that he was mine
He’s in my heart
And he’s in my mind
Sends shivers down my spine

He’s not the kind to stick around
He’s not the type to see things through
Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
But I do

He’s like a knock
On an open door
Don’t know what I’m waiting for
A little sweet that
I can’t ignore
I only want a little more

He breaks a heart with every smile
Breaks every rule I ever knew
Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
But I do

Do I want to feel the flame?
(yeah I do)
And know I’ll never be the same?
(Yeah I do)
He’s playing games and he’ll play me too…..
Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
But I do

He’s got this hard wild heart
And I’m not one for taking chances
So I run  when he advances
But he knows the truth
Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
But I do

Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
But I do

Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
But I sure do

Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
Like I do

He’s got this hard wild heart
And I’m not one for taking chances
So I run  when he advances
But he knows the truth
Can’t have him, shouldn’t want him
But I do

It’s every day
And it’s all the time
Wishing that he was mine.

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Introduce Yourself / Hi
« on: March 25, 2026, 06:15:54 pm »
Hey there, I’m Shelley, I’ve been writing lyrics for years and only recently started sharing them.   I’ve received some good feedback but am looking for opinions, possible collaborations.   I am NOT a musician or vocalist.  I would just love to hear someone sing or record my words.

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