https://www.soundclick.com/couchgrouch


She Just Is

Well, she comes to me across a cryptic, ancient stream
And we sail the night on currents of transcendent dreams

She is both a simple and a modern girl
And she’s blessed with dimples and long, auburn curls
When my heart is lonely in its rhyme
She heals me with a kiss
She doesn’t even know she’s magical
She just is

When a bluebird morning only makes me feel forlorn
She’ll caress my sorrow until I’m reborn

She is both a simple and a modern girl
And she’s blessed with dimples and long, auburn curls
When my heart is lonely in its rhyme
She heals me with a kiss
She doesn’t even know she’s beautiful
She just is

She’s beyond the measure
Of all the worlds I’ve wandered
She’s a richer treasure
Than all the pearls I’ve squandered

She’s beyond the measure
Of all the worlds I’ve wandered
She’s a richer treasure
Than all the pearls I’ve squandered

She is both a simple and a modern girl
And she’s blessed with dimples and long, auburn curls
When my heart is lonely in its rhyme
She heals me with a kiss
She doesn’t even know she’s heavenly
She just is

O She doesn’t even know she’s magical
She just is
She just is…

My Pleasure Stone,

I can't take credit for much. SUNO appears to have kept the chord pattern from my noodling, and also loosely echoed a couple of my riffs.

Beyond that, it just did it's thing. The soft jazz version is really growing on me. It's as if the demo had "Sade" for a vocalist.

Your lyrics conveyed a relaxed state of enjoyment and were very compelling in spots.


Aww the city favors a different mind
Someone who can stand the sight
Of a forest of concrete and hard lights
And the stormy sea of humanity


The cradle of life stretches to the horizon (love that line)
I found my way here to find some
Peace belonging and ease
And give in to the calling of the ocean’s breeze

Lovely writing,
Thanks for including me.
Lawhon

Also, WITH YOUR PERMISSION
I originally had in mind for this to be love song, in which someone compared their love interest to an ocean breeze. I still might take a shot at that. Do you mind if I use some of your lines? It would be a co-write.

OCEAN BREEZE (Soft jazz version)

https://soundclick.com/song/15278530

Lyrics by Stone Flowers aka ?
Origination riffs by Lawhon
Production by SUNO

Stone,
Your lyrics came to life with music behind them.
IMO, they are very very good and put a listener on the beach.
That line "cradle of life stretches to the horizon" is extraordinary IMO.
I'm not sure what I did on this. I fed your lyrics, along with my riffs into SUNO and simply prompted SUNO that this was soft jazz...and to assess all uploaded info and do it's thing.

Please give me your name as you would like to be credited on Soundclick and here.

I did a 2nd upload in which I did not assign a style. I simply told Suno to read the lyrics and do it's thing. I thought that version sold the mood of your lyrics better than the jazz version. Here is the link to that version.

https://soundclick.com/song/15278537




If I shouted please take me down to the sea
Would the wind hear me
And float me along to the beach

If the clouds drifted in
Would I be able to fly in my mind
And walk with deep sandy feet
drinking in the ocean’s breeze

Aww the city favors a different mind
Someone who can stand the sight
Of a forest of concrete and hard lights
And the stormy sea of humanity

But I long for the shore
Yeah I’ll find myself there on my knees
Watching the white caps blowing foam
Yeah I know what I need
A cool salty ocean breeze

The cradle of life stretches to the horizon
I found my way here to find some
Peace belonging and ease
And give in to the calling of the ocean’s breeze

Ah if the wind could pick me up
And float me to the sea
If only in my mind
I’ll surrender to the ocean’s breeze

"I Miss Me" is about a man who watches himself slowly disappear behind denial, anger, and emotional numbness, and longs to become the person he used to be before he got lost inside himself.

My wife listened to this one and spontaneously said that this song sounds like an ESC song. Many of my American friends won’t know what she’s talking about. That’s ok. It’s a positive comment.


I MISS ME
https://soundclick.com/song/15277133

[Instrumental Intro]

[Verse]
I tell them I’m just tired, nothing really serious
Just work and life and stress, nothing mysterious
But I feel myself slipping in ways I can’t explain
Like I’m standing in the sunshine, still feeling rain

[Verse]
I show up when I have to, I do what I can
Play the part of a father, the part of a man
But inside there’s a silence I don’t know how to name
And I keep acting normal like it all feels the same

[Pre-chorus]
They say “you don’t look like you’re okay”
I laugh it off and turn away
They reach for me, I pull back slow
I don’t let anyone really know

[Chorus]
I miss me
The way I used to be
Before I got lost
Inside of me
I’m still here
But I can’t break free
I miss me
I miss me

[Break]

[Verse]
I get angry too quickly, then I shut it down
Walk like a stranger in my own hometown
And the people that love me, I can see in their eyes
They’re reaching for someone I keep saying is fine

[Pre-chorus]
They say “just talk, we’re here for you”
But I change the subject like I always do
The door is open, I see the way
But I don’t step through, I walk away

[Chorus]
I miss me
The way I used to be
Before I got lost
Inside of me
I’m still here
But I can’t break free
I miss me
I miss me

[Bridge]
If I could meet him face to face
I don’t know what I would say
Would I ask him to come back home
Or say I pushed him away

[Interlude]

[Final chorus]
I miss me
The way I used to be
Before I got lost
Inside of me
If I reach out
Don’t let me leave
I miss me
I miss me

[Outro]
Don’t let me leave
I miss me
I miss me

Ok ok... you don't have to put it in all CAPS! lol ......


Carry on (smile)