That could work to record . 4s a tad long , but it stays locked in. Who could I lie to make more money to cut this
Oh what a wicked web we weave . Well she did , I'm innocent. Yes you need this job done next week , I gave you the best deal of century . Ignore pinocchio in the corner

I could read all sorts into the lyrics. It sounds personal but I could be completely wrong. Not a bad idea to keep listeners guessing I reckon. The makings of a classic song here. I think the vocal on the chorus stretches a bit too high - that's my only crit, but it's work in progress. A male voice might work better, but that might take it away from what you're trying to say. I'm liking this so far.

Quote from: whengen on May 05, 2026, 06:51:30 pm

Thanks. now you know why my dad called me his 4th daughter
I'm an artist, I see the emotion in the words not the intent. Glad you liked it and not liked 
Those were done when you posted them on the other site, so I only had those lyrics
Do you mind if I made one of mine public? they are private right now.

Lita Ford esq
https://suno.com/s/YFGa6S4hTdsrjEdT
btw, you write better than I do, you write from the heart, i can't do that.

Go Right ahead!!! And thanks for the compliment

Dang that sounds like Pat Benatar! Great job.

Thanks. now you know why my dad called me his 4th daughter
I'm an artist, I see the emotion in the words not the intent. Glad you liked it and not liked 
Those were done when you posted them on the other site, so I only had those lyrics
Do you mind if I made one of mine public? they are private right now.

Lita Ford esq
https://suno.com/s/YFGa6S4hTdsrjEdT
btw, you write better than I do, you write from the heart, i can't do that.

Go Right ahead!!! And thanks for the compliment

Kay-lynn,  sounds like you're a Rock Writer.

A rock writer?? hhaha thanks