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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / She Is
« Last post by rpirone on August 02, 2026, 12:28:26 pm »
Just a love song

https://soundclick.com/song/14288396

She Is
Verse
She’s got the look of a spy
With secrets to sell
You get lost in her eyes
And the stories they tell

Verse
Your heart beats double time
At the sound of her name
And you’d kill for that smile
That puts the stars to shame

Chorus
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets
She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is as good as love ever gets

Verse
She’s like the soft melody
That ev’ry summer sings
And she’s the autumn breeze
That each October brings

Verse
She’s got the heart and the soul
Of a Harlem choir
And you spend all your nights
Lost in dreams she inspires

Chorus
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets
She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is as good as love ever gets

Bridge:
She is the Roxanne that Cyrano pined for
And she’s the Dulcinea that Quixote would die for
She’s the Esmeralda you’d live your life for
She is

Chorus
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets
She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is as good as love ever gets
She is (3x)
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Introduce Yourself / Re: I appreciate the invitation to join
« Last post by billdraper on August 02, 2026, 11:47:59 am »
Yeah! Let’s hear some tunes.
Welcome.
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Introduce Yourself / Re: New member
« Last post by billdraper on August 02, 2026, 11:46:36 am »
Welcome!!

51 years is a long time…cool.

 What is EP?

Bill
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Take My Mind Off My Heart demo
« Last post by billdraper on August 01, 2026, 06:49:43 pm »
The lyric and music is so incredibly clean and hypnotic…wow. Yeah movie like dreamland amazing escape other world fest-ique.

Tripped a bit on cheat. Perfect rhyme, but in retreat, no surprise, unfair is arguable? But…she so relaxed, almost expected him back..haha.

Good song!!!
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Introduce Yourself / Re: New member
« Last post by Tex on July 31, 2026, 11:42:22 pm »
Welcome, post some of what you've done and we'll listen and read them.

Tex
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Take My Mind Off My Heart demo
« Last post by Couchgrouch on July 31, 2026, 06:01:15 pm »
I was going to arrange several tracks in a row as a jazz suite, but ran out of motivation, haha. It would be about 20 minutes long.

I may get around to it...
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Take My Mind Off My Heart demo
« Last post by redwriter1 on July 31, 2026, 05:32:44 pm »
I'll have to go back over the lyrics again, but the singer is not something for my ears, personally, but sounds like a great movie soundtrack!!!
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Introduce Yourself / New member
« Last post by Gregoire69 on July 31, 2026, 03:12:01 pm »
Hi everybody, my name is Greg and I am 69, and I have been writing songs since I was 18, however I only began to improve around 10 years ago when I began posting lyrics and music for critique, initially on a site called Drooble, which is now unfortunately defunct. I write lyrics and music but I enjoy collaborating with others and I am currently working on an EP with a friend of which is a collection of six rock / alt rock sings
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Take My Mind Off My Heart demo
« Last post by Couchgrouch on July 30, 2026, 08:16:26 pm »
https://www.soundclick.com/couchgrouch

Take My Mind Off My Heart   © 2026 Robert George


Well, I shuffled through the fog
Down a dirty boulevard
To a revival theater on third
Snuck in a Hershey Bar
Watched Casablanca in the dark
And tried to take my mind off my heart

Wandered up the avenue
Then I listened to
Kind of Blue
In the dingy walk-up I call home
Sipped on some Cutty Sark
Cursed the neighbor’s mutt when he barked
And tried to take my mind off my heart

Take my mind off my heart

When I told him I cared
He’d always retreat
I always played fair
So why did he cheat

The knock was faint on my door
My fishnets whispered across the floor
And there he was with his hat in his hand
He said, “broken souls cry alike
I was four rows behind you tonight
Tryin’ to take my mind off my heart

Tryin’ to take my mind off my heart
My mind off my heart
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: DONE WITH THIS DAY (co-write)
« Last post by redwriter1 on July 30, 2026, 06:55:53 pm »
Mother told me there’d be, days like these…ha!
I like the decisiveness, and up beat pace, and alliteration.
Modified final chorus is great and like the bridge and basic structure. No wasted words, to the point, universal theme, and looking beyond to tommorrow.
Encore!

Wow Bill.. I know you are good reviewer but I'm extremely happy you outlined all the hard work we put into this song. Literally 48 versions, moving words around, moving verses around.. my co-writer gets credit for the last chorus... and it was great.  Thanks for paying such close attention!! You such a great person on this forum!
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