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Nice song Sid. You're using the technology to great advantage. Great words and I reckon this has a commercial feel to it - not that I'd know!! Just the odd moment on the vocal which gives away that it's AI - but that really is me nit picking. This is great Sid. Keep em comin'

My first song on this forum. It was loosely inspired by a long weekend in Paris with my daughter. Hope I've done this right.MétropolitainWords and music written and performed by Chris Price ©2026MétropolitainI’m heading south again to the boulevard Margeurite de RochechouartI’m seeing an old new friend, she live so near but never go that farUp and down the metro line, Haute cuisine and drink fine wineCamembert demi baguette, her gallic shrug you can’t forgetIt was love on Line 2...of the Métropolitain LineShe wore the t-shirt and beret, conquered me in every wayBroken English and broken heart, spit me out I have no sayUp and down the metro line, Haute cuisine and drink fine wineCamembert and French baguette, the gallic shrug you can’t forgetIt was love on Line 2…With a sophisticated, cosmopolitan liberal mind and her psychedelic streakTurn me inside out with all her streetwise and funky debonair chiqueI’m heading south again to the boulevard Margeurite de RochechouartI’m seeing an old new friend, she live so near but never go that farUp and down the metro line, Haute cuisine and drink fine wineCamembert and French baguette, her gallic shrug you can’t forgetSmoking gauloises cigarettes, salade nicoise and lipstick wetPassion like I never knew, love me till I’m black n blueIt was love on Line 2

Hey Sid,There are a lot of good things I’m hearing here. Your chorus is extremely powerful - you’re delivering a strong message using simple words and short lines, which makes it both memorable and catchy. All in all, you’ve crafted a beautiful song.In every song, there’s always room for improvement. Here are a few ideas you might want to explore:• Verse structure: Verse 1 is written differently from verses 2 and 3. The syllable count varies quite a bit, and if you listen closely, you’ll notice that Suno created a different melody for verse 1. I actually prefer the flow and feel of verse 1, so you might consider tightening the wording in verses 2 and 3 to better match it.• Intro length: Radio-friendly songs tend to have shorter intros. If you’re working with the Suno stems, you could shorten the intro in your DAW - for example, by cutting the section from 0:11 to 0:21. That would bring your first chorus in about 10 seconds earlier, which could improve the pacing.• Pre-chorus idea: Instead of going straight into the chorus, you might try adding a two-line or 4-line pre-chorus. You could reuse it later as well, which adds some melodic variation.• Outro: The outro is well written with strong rhymes, but I’m a big fan of ending on the hook line to make the song more “sticky.” The current lines could work nicely as part of a verse or even a pre-chorus.• Interlude: The longer instrumental section after the second chorus might not be necessary. In modern pop songs, that kind of break often comes after the bridge (before the final chorus) instead.Like I said, this is a very solid track. You should be proud of it.All the best,Robert

Words Me; Music - Sunohttps://suno.com/s/qbiOXZlQw9j0KuBj[Intro]You stand in judgement before the courtOf the crimson crows, what say youYou say I know of what I've doneMy questions questioned, what say you[Chorus]A swirling swarm of crimson redsAnd ashen whites murders the nightDancing sensually with druidsThe sun embracing moon blends fluid[Verse 1]Standing in a forest of doors lockedA key is behind faceless spinning clocksKnocking without answers, what say you[Chorus]A swirling swarm of crimson redsAnd ashen whites murders the nightDancing sensually with druidsThe sun embracing moon blends fluid[Verse 2]Whirling sullen crows goes aroundFeathered rain stains the groundMolting muffling my deciding mind[Chorus]A swirling swarm of crimson redsAnd ashen whites murders the nightDancing sensually with druidsThe sun embracing moon blends fluid[Outro]Why am I here? (Because you are)Where is here? (Where you are)I'm not anywhere, (Yes you are)You're not being clear, (Aren't we?)

I had a co-worker with this sentiment - If you don’t like this speed I’m goin’ at /You’re gonna hate the next one  - and he said it in a slow southern drawl too, which made it even funnier

Actually made me laugh outloud...........!! Great job.

Nice Elvis,reminds me of my wife's driving, someone gets behind her to close and she slows down.  Yeah, go at your own speed.

Thanks Elvis

Simple lyric , I agree it should combine v1 and V2 before hitting that chorus , Maybe add a post chorus to make it different Sounds good Sid

Real cool twist of that cliche , Really could careless who's its about , And you know I hate politics worse than my ex wives , sounds good man