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Ok here ya go.



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That came out pretty good. Better than I thought. Hope she's happy with the results.
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Yeah, I was a little surprised too, but I knew there were spaces in those lyrics to play around with, so , it may not be perfect, but it sure gives you a starting point.  Sometimes that's useful.
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So happy with this!  Was actually amazed at how good it came out.

Thank you!
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Yeah!!!!! I'm glad you let me give it a try. I hope it came out the way you heard it in your head.  It took me multiple tries to get it right.

congrats!

Now you can put it on the mp3 board if you want.(smile)
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Quote from: Shelleyanne on March 26, 2026, 08:35:35 pm
Definitely a pop/country vibe I think

This is not country genre. More light pop/jazz. Another take on it, just for fun.

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Song has great potential, in my view. I would edit, trim a little, structure it sharply, and then it can be further enhanced with ad-libs, refrains, etc. This is something I would pursue - it has too much potential to let it die. Good luck!
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Hey Bill, that was a pretty good version too.  I liked the layered vocals in my version, but I liked your jazzy take as well!
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Hi Shelleyanne,
I don’t think the lyric needs to be trimmed.

But. How is the storyline resolved? Could be in movie or tv series…stay tuned for the next chapter!
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Heck yeah Bill, I like that version...
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