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Don’t Talk to Me Like That
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If you say you miss me
I might take your hand
If you say you’re sorry
I’ll say I understand

If you say there’s no one else like me
I’ll take you back
I don’t want to hear it
Don’t talk to me like that

Chorus
Tell me I misunderstood
Lay down all your charm
Tell me you still love me
And I’ll fall into your arms

Tell me no one knows you like I do
I’ll take you back
I can’t stand to hear it
Don’t talk to me like that

Bridge
When I close my eyes I hear your voice
You’re sorry but you had to make a choice
You’ve said your piece, I know what I heard
Not another smile, not another word

Chorus
Tell me I misunderstood
Lay down all your charm
Tell me you still love me
I might fall into your arms

Tell me no one loves you like I do
I’ll take you back
Please don’t let me hear it
You can’t talk to me like that

It’s too late to change your mind
It’s too late to walk it back
I don’t want to hear it
You can’t talk to me like that

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Re: Don’t Talk to Me Like That
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Hello Shelly,

I had to listen to this twice, the first time I wasn't catching it.

Just a suggestion.... how about you having 6 line verses and two line pre-chorus's

I don't want to hear it
Don't talk to me like that

Should be your pre-chorus's

A 6 line verse
pre-chorus
chorus
6 line verse
pre-chorus
chorus
bridge
chorus
outro

Just my thinking, but it's fine like it is.
Best to you
Tex

Re: Don’t Talk to Me Like That
« Reply #2 on: »
Thanks Tex, always appreciate feedback!  I’ll play with it a bit, see what works  :)

Re: Don’t Talk to Me Like That
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its a little hard to grasp but I got the story , Tex has some good ideas

Re: Don’t Talk to Me Like That
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This is a good listen. I read Tex's suggestions - I'd be interested to hear it that way, but I'm liking this a lot as it is. The right lyrics for this genre.  :)

Re: Don’t Talk to Me Like That
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I'm with Chris on this one, whichever way you go with the structure it's still gonna come out an excellent song that ticks all the boxes. Loved it, well done.
Sid