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One of my originals, melody and lyrics, me singing.  Suno providing the instruments.  I'm trying to save the world here.

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Can you post the lyrics?

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Quote from: redwriter1 on July 20, 2026, 12:14:35 pm
Can you post the lyrics?

Oooowhoops, here's the lyrics:

Hello excuse me can I share a little bit of your time
You know that you might be a little wiser than I am
I’m trying to sing a message that everyone can hum along
Can you help me write this song?

There’s a chord I need  to make this song chime
There’s a word I’m looking for to help this world find reason and rhyme
I’m not sure but it might be love or fight
But maybe you’re better at finding words for a poem
So can you help me write this song

Sit down with me here don’t be afraid to speak from inside
Look deep in the sky let an inner voice take control
Well maybe the right words will have a calming power
Maybe together we can make this message strong
Hey can you help me write this song?

Break 
               
Well Listen to me think about what I’m trying to say
A song of comfort to give you breath and take your fear away
Can you think of a way to explain
That the futures uncertain but hope remains strong
And the doubts we all feel might disappear some dawn
Come on help me write this song?

Sit down with me here don’t be ashamed to let your inner thoughts show
Look the world in the eyes  speak of what  we all hope to find
If we sing the right song it just might bring a change
Or maybe our voices just needed to sing all along
Hey can you help me sing this song?

Break

I know we  may  never all  be  friends
A lot of talk  about  love  and  peace  but  why  pretend
We were  born  to  fight  for  life  and the  fights  will  never  end
We weren’t  made  to  understand
Where life’s  going  or  where  it  came  from

But a simple song might help bring harmony along
We all want to hear it cutting clear through the fog
You know it when you feel it it’s been playing all along
So come on help me sing this sooooooong


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Nice tune Stone.   ;D
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Noodlin' guitar player
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Nice tune Stone. 

Hey thanks you tuning in Lawhon.
How it that playlist on Spotify project coming along?
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Hey Stone,

life is getting in the way of my progress just a little bit. However, I am up to seven or eight songs that are good to go with artwork. My goal is 10 to 12 songs. I should be there relatively soon. Thanks for asking. Keep writing.

Your song is kind of an outlier,in that the rest of the songs are country-ish americana-ish. I would categorize the one that you wrote as soft jazz, but I liked what you wrote so much that I had to include it anyway
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Your song is kind of an outlier,in that the rest of the songs are country-ish americana-ish. I would categorize the one that you wrote as soft jazz, but I liked what you wrote so much that I had to include it anyway

Keep on brother, can't wait to hear some.  Hey thanks yeah it's kind of 60's save the world ditty.  I'll post sumpin country comin up
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