Evening all, I wrote these lyrics a few months ago, and am just learning to play with Suno.  I’m not 100% on the results I got, but since it’s the lyrics I want to showcase…. Well, let me know what you think.  Here are the lyrics for your review as well:

I Know What’s True

It’s okay
I just thought I heard you
Maybe call my name
But I can see that you have plans
And I don’t mean to just step in
So it’s okay
I’ll step back and fade away again

I know what’s true
I hear what I want to hear
And mostly, I hear you
Telling me you want me there
Your hands tucked tightly in my hair
Your mouth on mine
My heartbeat, black and blue
I hear what I want hear
I only hear what I want to hear
With you

Don’t be sad
I just thought I saw you
Reaching for my hand
But you’ve been very clear and
You know, I understand
So don’t be sad
I’ll fade away just like we never planned

I know what’s true
I see what I want to see
And mostly, I see you
Smiling down into my face
Leaning into my embrace
Your eyes so wide
My heartbeat, black and blue
I see what I want to see
I only see what I want to see
With you

It’s all right
I just know I want to be
With you tonight
But my timing is all wrong
And I can’t ever get it right
But it’s all right
I’ll fade away just like the evening light

I know what’s true
I know what I want to know
I just don’t know you
Don’t know the slide of your sweet skin
Where do you start
And I begin
My poor heartbeat, so black and blue
I know what I want to know
I only know what I want to know
With you

I like the music, sounds like a soundtrack for a movie.  I would experiment with Suno a little more so the music and singer don't sound so..... mmmm... resigned and hurt.

If you want me to play with it a bit, happy to do that, but if you're happy with it, write on!

Very nicely formatted, easy to follow again, and truly heartbreaking.

Ok, I took out a couple of lines.

What do you think?

Girl it's your song, go for it!

I sorta liked the male voice, but that's just me.

I would still consider doing some edits of the words, because there's words repeated alot.

Maybe you can ask Suno/chatgpt for a Karen Carpenter type voice.