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Just a love song

Pirone Songwriter-Inspired Indie Pop Track | She Is by Rich Pirone
"She Is" is an Indie Pop song by Rich Pirone. It captures the style and energy of Pirone Songwriter. Available now on SoundClick.
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She Is
Verse
She’s got the look of a spy
With secrets to sell
You get lost in her eyes
And the stories they tell

Verse
Your heart beats double time
At the sound of her name
And you’d kill for that smile
That puts the stars to shame

Chorus
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets
She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is as good as love ever gets

Verse
She’s like the soft melody
That ev’ry summer sings
And she’s the autumn breeze
That each October brings

Verse
She’s got the heart and the soul
Of a Harlem choir
And you spend all your nights
Lost in dreams she inspires

Chorus
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets
She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is as good as love ever gets

Bridge:
She is the Roxanne that Cyrano pined for
And she’s the Dulcinea that Quixote would die for
She’s the Esmeralda you’d live your life for
She is

Chorus
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets
She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is as good as love ever gets
She is (3x)
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I like the laid-back vibe and really enjoyed the listen. The vocalist reminds me a bit of Michael Bublé. I personally think the arrangement could be improved by adding a short [break] or instrumental [interlude] to create a little more variation. Other than that, I think it's a great song.

All the best,
Robert
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Thanks for giving this a listen.  Much appreciated. Michael Buble is exactly the kind of artist I had in mind. I like to try to write songs in the vein of the Great American Songbook. I may not always succeed. but it's something I shootfor.
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Very Smooth....

I think the cadence of the melody can be a little repetitive, but that is only my opinion. Perhaps even consider 3 lines in verses instead of everything being four?  Rhyming pattern may be AAB - AAB.  This will sometimes introduce space.  Also (and this is often my preference) I like choruses to lift a song up.  The first two lines of your chorus almost feels like a prechorus...I might consider using that chord structure as a prechorus, then go into a full blown chorus where your voce sings on a higher level than the rest of the song, therefor lifting it up?  This is only my opinion and preference though.

Example I might consider is...

prechorus:
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets

Chorus ( now maybe singing in a slightly higher range...rooted in E?)
She is...She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is...(line rhymes with need)
She is...(Line rhymes with need or gets?)
She is...as good as love ever gets

This can cement the chorus so every time you hear it, you know you are there...


Thanks for sharing! 
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Quote from: Spymonsayz on August 04, 2026, 09:46:42 am
Very Smooth....

I think the cadence of the melody can be a little repetitive, but that is only my opinion. Perhaps even consider 3 lines in verses instead of everything being four?  Rhyming pattern may be AAB - AAB.  This will sometimes introduce space.  Also (and this is often my preference) I like choruses to lift a song up.  The first two lines of your chorus almost feels like a prechorus...I might consider using that chord structure as a prechorus, then go into a full blown chorus where your voce sings on a higher level than the rest of the song, therefor lifting it up?  This is only my opinion and preference though.

Example I might consider is...

prechorus:
She’s ev’ry mem’ry that you’ll ever keep
She’s why the sun rises and sets

Chorus ( now maybe singing in a slightly higher range...rooted in E?)
She is...She’s ev’rything you’ll ever need
She is...(line rhymes with need)
She is...(Line rhymes with need or gets?)
She is...as good as love ever gets

This can cement the chorus so every time you hear it, you know you are there...


Thanks for sharing!


I find that to be a good critique. I concur.
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What a sweet easy flowing beautiful sunshiny song.  Really enjoyed your tune man, write on!
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