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Just got this demo back from my producer/co-writer Gerry Peters. Feedback is welcomed and appreciated.

Discover "The Heart Remembers", an Indie Pop track by Rich Pirone. It captures the style and energy of Pirone Songwriter. Available now on SoundClick.
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I really like this tune-vocals, music, and lyrics all work well together. The line ‘Sometimes your lips smile but your eyes don’t’ really stood out to me, and I found myself wanting more of that kind of imagery throughout the song. It made the emotion feel more immediate and visual. I think the song could be even stronger if it leaned a bit more into those kinds of specific, observational moments alongside the more general emotional lines.  Again, I really enjoyed listening.  :)

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Thanks for checking this out. The lyric you pointed out was a last minute rewrite. Glad I trusted my instinct on that one.