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One from the back catalogue

words mine/rest Ai

Acoustic Song | When you get whats comin to you by Sid Shovel | Stream Free
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[intro]


 [verse 1]

 Well you might be rich and a stuck up ****

 But you should'na done what you did

 The things you said, you should'a kept to yourself

 She was only sixteen and still just a kid


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [verse 2]

 You pulled one of your tricks just to get those pic's

 That guy would do whatever you said

 She didn't know she was in a video

 With the crush who had her in his bed


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [verse 3]

 Your boyfriend Zac, was the star quarterback

 You were blind to the passes under the bleachers

 Till I sent the head some 6 by 4's in colour

 of Zac scoring a touchdown, with one of the teachers


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [bridge]

 You got what you deserved,

 and I really hope it hurt.

 For all the pain you caused,

 I'm glad that I was there


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [outro]

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you

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Re: When you get whats comin to you
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Revenge can be a **** for one side but a pleasure for another side.

Not bad at all, Sid
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Re: When you get whats comin to you
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I like this Sid. It's built around a well used chord sequence..not a crit - most of my songs are too!! You say it's back catalog..I don't remember hearing this one before. The vocal is very AI - but I'm thinking that might be intentional here. A damn good song. :)
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Re: When you get whats comin to you
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Thanks Tex/Chris,
Appreciate you finding the time to comment.
As to the chords, I wouldn't know my Am from my G7, thought it was a finance thing.
The kiddie vocals drive me nuts and it's only recently I've found a way to get around it.
The melody and rhythm seemed to go down a well worn country track so I opted for those.

Sid
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Love the voice and melody that suno came up with (can you share the prompt?)

But as far as the lyric goes, what exactly happened?  What is the story?

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Re: When you get whats comin to you
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As Tex points out, it's a simple revenge story, she sets up a naive kid and then she gets her just desserts by being set up herself. In this song, the story takes a back seat to the music and the hook.
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Yeah, I'm kinda of a stickler for the story, since I'm a  Nashville writer.  But I still wanna know the real story to see if the lyric matches it.

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