Starfish Songwriters
The Sandbox => MP3 songs for Review/Critique => Topic started by: Tex on May 29, 2026, 10:38:48 pm
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Ah sorry buddy. Me and P&C take no prisoners 'cause we know we have to look after them
Besides...Fedex can't...hey wait, anyone doing frozen food ecpress parcel service?
Might be worth sending you a half litre just to see if they get it to you by 10am guaranteed
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Oh yeah Tex...the lyric is fantastic....a great rollick through ICD
OK...going to listen now
This is an awesome song Tex... I bow down to you!!!!
Thank you for a great chuckle ...man what a bridge
OK I am done being effusive and off to look for a half litre of peanut butter and chocolate
Thanks John, save a scoop for me! 8)
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This is great. Makes me wanna go out and buy some ice-cream. Fun song. Put a smile on my face.
Thanks Pistol, My favorite is Rocky Road :P
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Oh yeah Tex...the lyric is fantastic....a great rollick through ICD
OK...going to listen now
This is an awesome song Tex... I bow down to you!!!!
Thank you for a great chuckle ...man what a bridge
OK I am done being effusive and off to look for a half litre of peanut butter and chocolate
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This is great. Makes me wanna go out and buy some ice-cream. Fun song. Put a smile on my face.
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Tons of them , and I do not agree every angle has been done . All people have something new to say .Except Nashville on trucks and Sat night , move on . You don't have a truck anyway . You have a Tesla . your just saying that cuz farmers have trucks . You do not go to dive bars . your rich , So sing your life and stop bullshitting me . You're tempted by your maid . give me some honesty here . Elvis is giving Nashville a hard time again , cuz I live in a trailer on a lake .
On a positive note , I'm getting along with my gay neighbor.
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ha ha ha , thats a good one Tex
Thanks Elvis...
Trying to find hooks that have never been done before.
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ha ha ha , thats a good one Tex
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Something I found out I got :D
https://suno.com/s/yM6WTL6Z3RO8U6Wr
Ice Cream Deficiency
I woke up this mornin', somethin' wasn't right
The birds quit singin', the sun lost its light
My spoon was lonely, my freezer was bare
I checked every shelf but vanilla wasn't there
The doctor said, "Son, have a seat with me,
You've got a rare condition called ICD."
I've got Ice Cream Deficiency
It's a serious emergency
No chocolate, no cookie dough
My happiness is sinkin' low
Some folks need vitamin A through Z
I need rocky road intravenously
I've got Ice Cream Deficiency
Won't somebody scoop for me?
I tried eatin' celery, I tried eatin' kale
But every healthy substitute was a miserable fail
My neighbor brought carrots and a bag of peas
I said, "Thanks, but can they come in mint-chip, please."
The symptoms got worse by half past three
I started hallucinating sundaes in the trees
I've got Ice Cream Deficiency
It's a sticky little tragedy
No sprinkles, no waffle cone
I can't survive on bread alone
The medical journals may disagree
But my tongue says, "More ice cream therapy!"
I've got Ice Cream Deficiency
And it's gettin' the best of me
Send in the sherbet! Launch the gelato!
This is not a drill---where'd the pistachio go?
I've got Ice Cream Deficiency
The world's greatest catastrophe
From strawberry swirl to pralines and cream
They're the fuel behind my every dream
If loving ice cream's a disease, you'll see
I never want a cure prescribed to me
I've got Ice Cream Deficiency
And I'm proud of my condition-ality!
The doctor shook his head and said, "You're fine."
I said, "Then why'd I just eat six pints?"
He said, "That's exactly what concerns me."
I said, "Pass the spoon and mind your own business, if ya please."