Recent Posts

Quote from: whengen on 06 May, 2026 09:49Words Me; Music Sunohttps://suno.com/s/qXSVDtJNbV27zGPb[Verse 1]There was a time when bells chimedFinding myself of new mindThis reality is perceived to beFound in trumpeting sounds[Verse 2]My heart beats to stomping feetMarching in place as my faceMelts away to other daysNever losing sight of right[Verse 3]I've lost my ears and cannot hearWhat's being said, am I deadOr alive, this meaning I striveTo understand the shifting sands[Verse 4]I am so old, my body's gone coldRunning back from the blackTo the wight only seems rightOn solid ground I'm crowned[Outro]With this wood box I couldBe at peace and finally ceaseLiving and gradually givingAshes and dust to ashes and dustActually that is a structure , Its a A/A/A/A , To The Moon and back by Luke Bryan used that Sounds good Bill

Yeah, I'm kinda of a stickler for the story, since I'm a  Nashville writer.  But I still wanna know the real story to see if the lyric matches it.

As Tex points out, it's a simple revenge story, she sets up a naive kid and then she gets her just desserts by being set up herself. In this song, the story takes a back seat to the music and the hook.

The easiest songs to write are the truth.  And this literally was my life. My CRV did break down, we really did have 3 lawnmowers and only one of them ran, someone gave us a grill we would be charcoal on it............haha Oh yeah, the hot tub was true, too, until I made my husband get rid of the dang thing.The truth is always easy to write about.  And you really do have to "chose" to be happy.  That's what I believe anyway. (smile)

That's why I like it, because you are free to explore more with the words, than being stuck behind the traditional format. 

Ok, point taken. Thanks for the info!

Love the voice and melody that suno came up with (can you share the prompt?)But as far as the lyric goes, what exactly happened?  What is the story?

Thanks for the comment. Not all songs have a chorus or a bridge for that matter. especially in the prog /experimental genres.

Are you sure this is a lyric and not a poem?  I'm just asking because songs usually have a chorus (?)

Wow, you really dug deep on this one!   I know I posted it a few days ago, so that's a good job.Myself and another writer were actually working on this song for the past week and it's almost done, but I wanted to get other people's input, so thank you for that!I'll post our lyric later today and see what you think!Welcome to the forum!!