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Words Me; Music Sunohttps://suno.com/s/qXSVDtJNbV27zGPb[Verse 1]There was a time when bells chimedFinding myself of new mindThis reality is perceived to beFound in trumpeting sounds[Verse 2]My heart beats to stomping feetMarching in place as my faceMelts away to other daysNever losing sight of right[Verse 3]I've lost my ears and cannot hearWhat's being said, am I deadOr alive, this meaning I striveTo understand the shifting sands[Verse 4]I am so old, my body's gone coldRunning back from the blackTo the wight only seems rightOn solid ground I'm crowned[Outro]With this wood box I couldBe at peace and finally ceaseLiving and gradually givingAshes and dust to ashes and dust

followed your advice Robert, and I'm very pleased with the outcome.Here's the link to the modified version for anyone interestedhttps://soundclick.com/song/15248998and the modified lyrics to comply with Robert's suggestions:[intro][verse 1]I need to hold you,feel your arms around me.The warmth of your breath,flowin’ soft across my neck.[verse 2]So many nights I’ve dreamt of this,you pull me in so close.Close my eyes an’ taste your kiss,standin’ on my toes.[pre-chorus]Hold me here, don’t break the spell,just keep me close to you.[chorus]hold you,just let me hold you.Can’t live without you,never let me go.[verse 3]Like a scene from an old movie,I’ve seen it all in mind.I give myself to you completely,a feelin’ so divine.[bridge]Is this what love’s about,losin’ all control?Nothin’ matters but that moment,surrenderin’ body and soul.[long musical interlude][pre-chorus]Hold me here, don’t break the spell,just keep me close to you.[chorus]hold you,just let me hold you.Can’t live without you,never let me go.[outro]hold you,just let me hold you.All I ever wanted was you,never let me go.[fade to end]My thanks once again Robert, I've learnt some things today.Sid

Chris/Robert,Thank you so much for your comments both of you.In the spirit of openness and clarity and more for Roberts awareness, best I clarify a few things upfront.All I do is write the lyrics, my knowledge of music is zero. I use Ai purely as a delivery mechanism to listen to the words. This all just a hobby to me and I have no desire whatsoever to seek to monetize any aspect of my work ever. That said, I am keen to improve what I do, and fully open to others learning from my works and what others have to say about them. So while comments such as "radio ready" may have little relevance to me, they will for others and I encourage you to continue with those very important details.Apart from using various Ai engines, I don't know anything about other digital tools such as DAWs or stems etc. At my age (73), I have no intention of going down that road so my production skills, (if any) start and stop with Suno.Robert, I can't thank you enough for the invaluable constructive feedback you have taken the time to give to this offering. I can assure you I will be poring over every comment made with a view to implementing your suggestions and I encourage others to do the same. Chris is aware of my background from TSF so he's already in the loop and aware of my limitations.So glad to make your acquaintance and look forward to some good discussions in the future, my thanks again to you both.Sid

next song, I'll provide the cliff notes

ha ha ha , I'm out in space alright . Well keep writing songs about life , confuse people. 1000 free plugins , well there ya go

time must move much slower for you, which means you are out in space, as I have it at 7:52 and right now,i'm looking at the 1,000s of plugins that I was able to get for free

Well not today , it's 7pm . How about tomorrow at that crack of dawn when the rooster crows , next door to me . You sure are noisy , Kinda macho looking also

you mean in the present?

ok well there ya go , a goal to pursue in the future. Tik Tok Tik Tok , Ignore ASAP , I hate when they say that. 

Welcome.................. here come and sit down on the couch... play us something!!Happy to have you!