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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Lets See Who's The Darker Angel
« Last post by Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 07:09:44 pm »
https://suno.com/song/60b58e3f-0ac4-47de-ae87-0be270c6b65f

Verse 1
She walked in like trouble dressed up in black
Smile like a switchblade hid behind her back
Everybody warned me “boy don’t play that game”
But broken souls only listen to the rain
She knew every shortcut straight through my head
Every ghost I buried, every lie I said
Yeah she danced with demons, no doubt about it
But I ain’t the kind of man that scares easy now
Chorus
Let’s see who’s the darker angel when the truth comes out
When the whiskey quits talking and the lights burn out
You can point at my sins, baby I’ll point at yours
We both got footprints headed straight through hell’s door
You wear your halo tilted, I wear mine shot through
But one of us still knows what loyalty can do
Yeah the devil keeps score when the shadows tangle
Let’s see who’s the darker angel
Verse 2
She could start a wildfire with a goodbye kiss
Leave a man half ruined and still call it bliss
I was holding the line trying not to fall
While she treated hearts like wrecking balls
But I stayed when the whole town turned away
Took the hit, paid the tab, carried all the blame
Yeah I got scars that’d make a preacher cuss
But I never left people who depended on us
Chorus
Let’s see who’s the darker angel when the truth comes out
When the whiskey quits talking and the lights burn out
You can point at my sins, baby I’ll point at yours
We both got footprints headed straight through hell’s door
You wear your halo tilted, I wear mine shot through
But one of us still knows what loyalty can do
Yeah the devil keeps score when the shadows tangle
Let’s see who’s the darker angel
Bridge
Ain’t no saints leaning on a bar at 2AM
Just survivors trying to outrun where they’ve been
And if heaven’s got a blacklist with my name
At least I never played innocent in the flames
Final Chorus
Let’s see who’s the darker angel when the truth comes out
When the last door closes and there’s nobody around
Yeah I raised some hell but I carried my own
Never sold my soul just to feel less alone
You can judge this outlaw from the outside angle
But I loved hard enough to survive the damage
When the smoke finally clears from the danger
Let’s see who’s the darker angel
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Introduce Yourself / Re: Hello, StarfishSongwriters!
« Last post by Tex on May 05, 2026, 07:05:23 pm »
Hello Pistol,

Happy to see you come over here, join in and have some fun.
I've heard some of your work I think you'll fit in here.

Tex
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by Tex on May 05, 2026, 07:02:12 pm »
Kay-lynn,  sounds like you're a Rock Writer. :)
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Hi! Well I love a good challenge writing activity and this one pulled me in.  I hope this is the correct place to post it.  :D

This is what I came up with for the concept or idea of America metaphorically as a Woman.  Hope you like it.

I’m a Woman

V1
From conception I’ve labored in fight
My babies born in the dark of night
Always learning from what I’ve done
Sometimes I’ve lost, sometimes I’ve won
But I think I try too hard to be
The mother everyone wants to see
I think the house I’ve built is stressed
My home has always been a test

Ch
Oh I'm a woman
In a time
Where stable ground
Presents a climb
I'm a woman
At this stage
Torn inside
By fear and rage

V2
My body carries a weight beyond
My figure extends across the pond
No matter what you think of me
My hopes will shine, my stars are free
But deep inside my house there's tension
Bringing me to the world's attention
Where I will go and what I do
Will always simmer in my stew


Ch
Oh I'm a woman
In a time
Where stable ground
Presents a climb
I'm a woman
At this stage
Torn inside
By fear and rage

Br
I'm single just like my children
We've spread ourselves too thin
Struggling to keep up with standards that were set
Now the conflict is setting in


Ch
Oh I'm a woman
In a time
Where stable ground
Presents a climb
I'm a woman
At this stage
Torn inside
By fear and rage

© 2026 pistol
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: When you get whats comin to you
« Last post by Tex on May 05, 2026, 06:55:45 pm »
Revenge can be a **** for one side but a pleasure for another side.

Not bad at all, Sid
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Introduce Yourself / Hello, StarfishSongwriters!
« Last post by pistol on May 05, 2026, 06:53:33 pm »
Hello, Starfish Songwriters!

I will go by the name pistol I selected. For each songwriting universe I like to take different forms in the way of stage names.  Eager to try new songwriting landscapes, and I found this one based off a posting advertising it on another site soon to end. Looking forward to reading lyrics, hearing music. Will hopefully learn a little, have some fun.  I've been writing since I was in high school, and looking to improve upon the craft of writing songs.  I like all kinds of music, and enjoy writing lyrics. Open to collaborating with anyone.

Cheers!
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by whengen on May 05, 2026, 06:51:30 pm »
Thanks. now you know why my dad called me his 4th daughter :)
I'm an artist, I see the emotion in the words not the intent. Glad you liked it and not liked  :)
Those were done when you posted them on the other site, so I only had those lyrics :)
Do you mind if I made one of mine public? they are private right now.

Lita Ford esq :)
https://suno.com/s/YFGa6S4hTdsrjEdT
btw, you write better than I do, you write from the heart, i can't do that.

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / When you get whats comin to you
« Last post by sid shovel on May 05, 2026, 06:40:28 pm »
One from the back catalogue

words mine/rest Ai

https://soundclick.com/song/15240880


[intro]


 [verse 1]

 Well you might be rich and a stuck up ****

 But you should'na done what you did

 The things you said, you should'a kept to yourself

 She was only sixteen and still just a kid


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [verse 2]

 You pulled one of your tricks just to get those pic's

 That guy would do whatever you said

 She didn't know she was in a video

 With the crush who had her in his bed


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [verse 3]

 Your boyfriend Zac, was the star quarterback

 You were blind to the passes under the bleachers

 Till I sent the head some 6 by 4's in colour

 of Zac scoring a touchdown, with one of the teachers


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [bridge]

 You got what you deserved,

 and I really hope it hurt.

 For all the pain you caused,

 I'm glad that I was there


 [chorus]

 It does feel good, an' I knew that it would

 I've waited a while, for you to get your dues

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you


 [outro]

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you

 Oh, I really do care, an' I wanna be there

 When you get what's comin' to you

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Don’t Talk to Me Like That
« Last post by sid shovel on May 05, 2026, 06:26:02 pm »
I'm with Chris on this one, whichever way you go with the structure it's still gonna come out an excellent song that ticks all the boxes. Loved it, well done.
Sid
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: The Secret To Happiness
« Last post by sid shovel on May 05, 2026, 06:14:26 pm »
Easy on the ear, good foot-tapping country fare.
Thanks for sharing the secret to happiness, I'll have some of that!
Lovely song, well done.
Sid
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