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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by billdraper on July 27, 2026, 03:10:41 pm »
https://suno.com/s/qRbLHBsEE779kl0I

 Mine sounds like Taylor Swift.?

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by redwriter1 on July 27, 2026, 02:41:16 pm »
Quote from: Rob B. on July 27, 2026, 02:37:43 pm
Your version is cool. It's not "Thunder" from Imagine Dragons but I'd say what you have is even better.


Well thank you very much but I did have a co-writer for the past two days helping with the lyrics. It only took me 48 tries through Suno to even get to this one, the rest were pretty angry.. LOL   Actually kinda happy with it, may still tweek a few things. Anything look out of place to you?
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by Rob B. on July 27, 2026, 02:37:43 pm »
Your version is cool. It's not "Thunder" from Imagine Dragons but I'd say what you have is even better.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by redwriter1 on July 27, 2026, 02:25:06 pm »
Quote from: Rob B. on July 27, 2026, 02:18:39 pm
https://suno.com/s/KVZm2Wp5Jg7nZZRQ

OK........................nice work Rob! But since nobody was responding............ I came up with this. Let me know your thoughts.

https://suno.com/s/CSLndBMZwtvqykSj
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by Rob B. on July 27, 2026, 02:18:39 pm »
https://suno.com/s/KVZm2Wp5Jg7nZZRQ
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by redwriter1 on July 27, 2026, 09:43:10 am »
Quote from: Rob B. on July 27, 2026, 04:12:52 am
Hi Kay-lynn,
can you give me more information on "Before The Thunder". I don't know the song and Google says it's from Imagine Dragons. I doubt this is what you're looking for. Can you give me more information on what you want it to sound like. I can then give it a try.

Yes, it's Imagine Dragons. I love that song and that's the sort of vibe I want, but with a female voice.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by Rob B. on July 27, 2026, 04:12:52 am »
Hi Kay-lynn,
can you give me more information on "Before The Thunder". I don't know the song and Google says it's from Imagine Dragons. I doubt this is what you're looking for. Can you give me more information on what you want it to sound like. I can then give it a try.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by redwriter1 on July 26, 2026, 05:39:07 pm »
Dearest sweet Rob.

You put so much work into that. !

I was just looking for the verse/chorus I posted to be run through Suno to give me the right vibe because my prompts aren't giving me what I want.

And here you go writing a whole song.......................

Did you run this through suno ?
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by Rob B. on July 26, 2026, 02:47:18 pm »
Hi Kay-lynn,
I hope all is well. I gave it a shot. Maybe you'll find a line or two here that you want to use. Fell free to use as much as you want.

I'm So Done With This Day

Verse 1
Exhausted by conversations
Running out of patience
Pulled a hundred different ways
Trying just to make it home
Got nothing left to say
Yeah, I'm done with this day

Pre-Chorus
Every little thing went wrong
Some days just drag you along
If tomorrow's got a little light
I'll survive another night

Chorus
I'm sooooo done with this day
I'm done, done, done
There's nowhere to escape
Can't run, run, run
It's gonna start up again
And it ain't no fun, fun, fun
I'm sooooo done with this damn day

Verse 2
Traffic lights and ringing phones
Can't even hear my own thoughts
Everybody wants a piece of me
But nobody can see
I'm hanging by a thread
Just wanna crawl into bed

Pre-Chorus
Maybe when the morning comes
The weight won't feel this strong
Till then I'll close my tired eyes
And leave this day behind

Chorus
I'm sooooo done with this day
I'm done, done, done
There's nowhere to escape
Can't run, run, run
It's gonna start up again
And it ain't no fun, fun, fun
I'm sooooo done with this damn day

Bridge
Some days win, some days lose
Some days wear holes in your shoes
I'll shake it off somehow
Just not right now

One more breath
One more sigh
One less reason asking why
Tomorrow's waiting anyway

Final Chorus
I'm sooooo done with this day
I'm done, done, done
But tomorrow's on its way
Here comes the sun, sun, sun
Maybe it'll all make sense
When this one is gone, gone, gone
I'm sooooo done with this damn day
Yeah, this damn day

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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Suno fans, wanna play?
« Last post by redwriter1 on July 26, 2026, 02:05:59 pm »
Myself and co-writer are trying to give a vibe to this song like. "before the thunder"...........And since I"m not a guy, I need to use Suno to give me a strong male vocal like that.  We just have Verse 1 and the chorus so far. Anyone wanna play?

Exhausted from interactions
Frustrated and going off track in
Every different direction and
 just want to land safe at home
I got nothing left to say
I’m so done with this day

[chorus]
I’m soooooo done with this day
I’m done done done
there’s no way to escape
Can’t run run run
It's Gonna start up again
It’s not fun fun fun
I’m soooooo done with this damn day
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