My sweet family gifted me recording studio time and I'm so excited for the upcoming session. It's essentially time enough for one song but the studio adds instruments with the goal of getting it radio ready...I picked what I feel is my most modern song...this is a pretty rough demo and I think I can do the last chorus better but before I take it in the booth, I would appreciate any and all feedback...thanks in advance!
https://youtu.be/FkvcDXCsg84?si=A8eJKkHpAoQqO-uBUr 🔥
(Verse 1)
When the light shines through this empty room like a devil dressed in white
That halo callin' in the dark just don't feel right
Blazin' WYD through my soul like a worn down cigarette
And I ask myself exactly this as I try to forget
(Prechorus 1)
All the scars you left behind
On the fragments of my mind
After shatterin' my world by the bye
Still I hover on reply
How do you do this every time?
(Chorus 1)
I can't fall into those eyes
I won't let you hypnotize
I don't got any more line
To give
(Verse 2)
My friends keep telling me that all you wanna do ain't right
They don't know the times we made the room a sauna overnight
And that we'd spend it there burnin' for air until the mornin' light
But you'd just leave me here again in flames without an alibi
(Chorus 1)
(Chorus 2)
I'm just tryin' to survive
With you wired through my mind
How do I unengrave your fire
From my skin?
(Solo)
(Chorus 1) {soft}
(Chorus 2) {loud}
(Outro)
Oh tell me how to unengrave your fire
Love x 1
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