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Suno fans, wanna play?
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Myself and co-writer are trying to give a vibe to this song like. "before the thunder"...........And since I"m not a guy, I need to use Suno to give me a strong male vocal like that.  We just have Verse 1 and the chorus so far. Anyone wanna play?

Exhausted from interactions
Frustrated and going off track in
Every different direction and
 just want to land safe at home
I got nothing left to say
I’m so done with this day

[chorus]
I’m soooooo done with this day
I’m done done done
there’s no way to escape
Can’t run run run
It's Gonna start up again
It’s not fun fun fun
I’m soooooo done with this damn day
When you row someone else across the river, you get there yourself

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Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
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Hi Kay-lynn,
I hope all is well. I gave it a shot. Maybe you'll find a line or two here that you want to use. Fell free to use as much as you want.

I'm So Done With This Day

Verse 1
Exhausted by conversations
Running out of patience
Pulled a hundred different ways
Trying just to make it home
Got nothing left to say
Yeah, I'm done with this day

Pre-Chorus
Every little thing went wrong
Some days just drag you along
If tomorrow's got a little light
I'll survive another night

Chorus
I'm sooooo done with this day
I'm done, done, done
There's nowhere to escape
Can't run, run, run
It's gonna start up again
And it ain't no fun, fun, fun
I'm sooooo done with this damn day

Verse 2
Traffic lights and ringing phones
Can't even hear my own thoughts
Everybody wants a piece of me
But nobody can see
I'm hanging by a thread
Just wanna crawl into bed

Pre-Chorus
Maybe when the morning comes
The weight won't feel this strong
Till then I'll close my tired eyes
And leave this day behind

Chorus
I'm sooooo done with this day
I'm done, done, done
There's nowhere to escape
Can't run, run, run
It's gonna start up again
And it ain't no fun, fun, fun
I'm sooooo done with this damn day

Bridge
Some days win, some days lose
Some days wear holes in your shoes
I'll shake it off somehow
Just not right now

One more breath
One more sigh
One less reason asking why
Tomorrow's waiting anyway

Final Chorus
I'm sooooo done with this day
I'm done, done, done
But tomorrow's on its way
Here comes the sun, sun, sun
Maybe it'll all make sense
When this one is gone, gone, gone
I'm sooooo done with this damn day
Yeah, this damn day


Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #2 on: »
Dearest sweet Rob.

You put so much work into that. !

I was just looking for the verse/chorus I posted to be run through Suno to give me the right vibe because my prompts aren't giving me what I want.

And here you go writing a whole song.......................

Did you run this through suno ?
When you row someone else across the river, you get there yourself

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #3 on: »
Hi Kay-lynn,
can you give me more information on "Before The Thunder". I don't know the song and Google says it's from Imagine Dragons. I doubt this is what you're looking for. Can you give me more information on what you want it to sound like. I can then give it a try.

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
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Hi Kay-lynn,
can you give me more information on "Before The Thunder". I don't know the song and Google says it's from Imagine Dragons. I doubt this is what you're looking for. Can you give me more information on what you want it to sound like. I can then give it a try.

Yes, it's Imagine Dragons. I love that song and that's the sort of vibe I want, but with a female voice.
When you row someone else across the river, you get there yourself

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #5 on: »
Listen and make your own on Suno.
suno.com

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #6 on: »
https://suno.com/s/KVZm2Wp5Jg7nZZRQ

OK........................nice work Rob! But since nobody was responding............ I came up with this. Let me know your thoughts.

Listen and make your own on Suno.
suno.com
When you row someone else across the river, you get there yourself

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #7 on: »
Your version is cool. It's not "Thunder" from Imagine Dragons but I'd say what you have is even better.

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #8 on: »
Your version is cool. It's not "Thunder" from Imagine Dragons but I'd say what you have is even better.


Well thank you very much but I did have a co-writer for the past two days helping with the lyrics. It only took me 48 tries through Suno to even get to this one, the rest were pretty angry.. LOL   Actually kinda happy with it, may still tweek a few things. Anything look out of place to you?
When you row someone else across the river, you get there yourself

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #9 on: »
Listen and make your own on Suno.
suno.com


 Mine sounds like Taylor Swift.?


Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #10 on: »
Hello Kay-Lynn!

I enjoyed the thread here. Rob’s was an interesting and enjoyable take as usual and what you landed with was very interesting and lyric developed more as well. Fun! Thanks.
Bill


Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #11 on: »
This one more synth pop.
Listen and make your own on Suno.
suno.com

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #12 on: »
https://suno.com/s/qRbLHBsEE779kl0I

 Mine sounds like Taylor Swift.?

Funny you should say that Bill, cus I put in a Suno prompt for her voice............. nice catch!!

Pretty happy with it so far, but it's so much fun to see what other people do with it.

You're such a great addition to this forum!
When you row someone else across the river, you get there yourself

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #13 on: »
This is the final lyric we came up with..... I might change the mask of air line because I"m referring to the oxygen mask on airplanes, not sure that's getting through? Ya think?

Verse 1
I’ve about had it up to here
I look in the rear view mirror
How many hours does it take
For me to get 1… thing…. Done
Drop down that mask of air,
 cus right now I don’t care


[chorus]
I’m soooooo done with this day,
I’m done done done
there’s no way to escape
Can’t run run run
 Gonna start up again
 It’s not fun fun fun
I’m so done with this  day

Verse 2
Exhausted
from inter actions
Frusterated
getting off track in
Every different direction
I got nothing  left to say
I’m so done with this day

[chorus]
I’m soooooo done with this day,
I’m done done done
there’s no way to escape
Can’t run run run
 Gonna start up again
 It’s not fun fun fun
I’m so done with this  day

[bridge]
For the most part I've been blessed,
but some days are not like the rest.
 I need to remember, it's gonna get better
but now, let's just say.. I'm done with THIS day.

[chorus]
I’m soooooo done with this day,
I’m done done done
When tomorrow comes my way
gonna run run run
Gonna try it again
Start with fun fun fun
But I’m so done with this day
When you row someone else across the river, you get there yourself

Re: Suno fans, wanna play?
« Reply #14 on: »
I apologize up front for this opinion.
I think that this is a very good message and massively relatable...but...I don't feel like your lyrics "stuck it."

I never felt "put-in-the-song."

The airmask thing was lost on me until I read your clarification.

"exhausted from interactions" sounds like something that a news reporter would say.

"For the most part I've been blessed," seems beside-the-point and somewhat gratuitous.

Imho...it needs a scene or two where an interaction(s) is described.

Feel free to ignore me.

Lawhon
Noodlin' guitar player