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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Let's Fall In Love Again
« Last post by LAWHON on June 17, 2026, 06:43:44 pm »
I really like this song....the clarity of what you are saying comes through nicely and I love the simplicity of the lyric...and it is 100% relatable...been there done that...also impressed with what Suno does...but then it all starts with the author being talented....good stuff

Steve

Thanks Steve.
I had a feeling that there was somebody out there, other than me, who had found themselves looking at a circumstance like this, at some point in their life.

Thanks for the encouraging words.

 :)
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Let's Fall In Love Again
« Last post by Stauld on June 17, 2026, 05:47:36 pm »
I really like this song....the clarity of what you are saying comes through nicely and I love the simplicity of the lyric...and it is 100% relatable...been there done that...also impressed with what Suno does...but then it all starts with the author being talented....good stuff

Steve
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Let's Fall In Love Again
« Last post by LAWHON on June 17, 2026, 03:54:56 pm »
Red,
thank you for your comment and your feedback. As for me, I write from the gut hoping to reach people in the gut. This song is in the first person and it is telling it, because that's the way it looked at the time.
I write for me, and for people who would see this and immediately relate to it. I don't write for the music industry and don't worry about whatever their tacit rules are for writing songs.

Having said that, it does not mean that I don't appreciate your comments. I do appreciate them. I may not act on them, but it is informative to know what they are. And in the future, I may write a song where I show rather than tell. I'm sure that I will.

Thanks for stopping by
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Let's Fall In Love Again
« Last post by redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 03:00:38 pm »
I see the heart of this lyric, but in order to be a lyric, I would hope it wasn't so "literal".  I did this, you did that, let's try again.

You have to the "feeling" of the literal words and put them "into" a story, in my opinion.  I've done that exercise over the years.  Don't "tell" me, "show" me.

 
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
« Last post by redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 02:55:04 pm »
I like both versions.
As you said, they have the same bones.

As you also said, SUNO is so highly manicured that, it sounds like pros in a studio with a tier-one engineer.

Pretty song.

Thank you so much for listening!!!
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
« Last post by LAWHON on June 17, 2026, 02:52:47 pm »
I like both versions.
As you said, they have the same bones.

As you also said, SUNO is so highly manicured that, it sounds like pros in a studio with a tier-one engineer.

Pretty song.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
« Last post by redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 02:19:00 pm »


My actual voice is the soundclick version. but thanks for thinking I have that good of a voice! lol
Hmm sounds very similar to the Soundclick version. If I understand correctly Suno has some new feature that will mimic your actual voice, thought maybe that's what you were using.  Just curious trying to learn.
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That's very kewl.  the very first demo I uploaded actually did mimic my voice almost perfectly!
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My actual voice is the soundclick version. but thanks for thinking I have that good of a voice! lol
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Hmm sounds very similar to the Soundclick version. If I understand correctly Suno has some new feature that will mimic your actual voice, thought maybe that's what you were using.  Just curious trying to learn.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Out of the Dark (this is why I use Suno)
« Last post by redwriter1 on June 17, 2026, 12:34:37 pm »
Pretty profound difference to the upside from Suno.  But I'm curious is that your actual voice on the Suno version?


My actual voice is the soundclick version. but thanks for thinking I have that good of a voice! lol
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Pretty profound difference to the upside from Suno.  But I'm curious is that your actual voice on the Suno version?
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