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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: The Secret To Happiness
« Last post by sid shovel on May 05, 2026, 06:14:26 pm »
Easy on the ear, good foot-tapping country fare.
Thanks for sharing the secret to happiness, I'll have some of that!
Lovely song, well done.
Sid
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by redwriter1 on May 05, 2026, 05:48:41 pm »
Ok.
One is based on tori amos
https://suno.com/s/i55nRTONLF6MlAzi

and the other is fiona apple
https://suno.com/s/msAIDZixRwxhD5OG
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Those are both beautiful, but damn..... I'm not trying to get someone to cry in their beer... lol.. That's why I was trying to make it "defiant" sounding. Like... yup......... it's a good thing I don't remember... (or a few ppl might be under the ground right now)... Don't wanna say that in a song , now do we?? LOL   

I seriously am extremely grateful.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by redwriter1 on May 05, 2026, 05:45:03 pm »
So sorry, I revised the lyric, I thought I had already posted it here.

I wanted to give some positive spin at the end.


I don’t know the reason I sleep with my shirt on
I don’t remember why I don’t have a nightgown
I can’t sleep in my bare skin, exposed and naked
Blankets won’t help and I can’t escape it

That feeling of being dirty for no reason
I need protection from something unseen
I don’t know what happened and I’m glad that I don’t
But everything is not as it seems

chorus
I don’t want to know, what I don’t know
What good would it do me now?
My life would not change and thoughts rearranged
Won’t be a guiding light at the end of a chain of events
I don’t wanna know and that’s my defense.

Something long ago was broken inside and hidden
I’m not ashamed why should I be
Memories get erased so I can still be free
Cus nothing that was………….. was about me

Bridge
But my kids are gonna know when love is real
My love for them will change generations


They’re gonna know, what I didn’t know
The touch of a hand that is always safe
Their lives are now changed and thoughts rearranged
Now’s there’s light at the end of that chain of events
Oh yeah they’re gonna know……………. And that’s their defense.


I don’t want to know, what I don’t know
What good would it do me now?
My life would not change and thoughts rearranged
Won’t be a guiding light at the end of a chain of events
I don’t wanna know .............................and that’s my defense.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by whengen on May 05, 2026, 05:30:44 pm »
Ok.
One is based on tori amos
https://suno.com/s/i55nRTONLF6MlAzi

and the other is fiona apple
https://suno.com/s/msAIDZixRwxhD5OG
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by redwriter1 on May 05, 2026, 05:23:07 pm »
Hey, if you have a great idea, I'm all for it.!!! That's why we call this the sandbox......... we're just building and playing and seeing what works. Would love to hear your version.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by whengen on May 05, 2026, 04:40:26 pm »
And then here I come :) :D  ;D  :D
If you don't mind, I have a vision of how I think the music can emphasize your lyrics as is.
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
« Last post by whengen on May 05, 2026, 04:34:51 pm »
I'm not going to do that until I can monetize them. i'm working on getting up to speed on logic pro and going to produce my own. but thanks for the suggestion :)
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: My Defense
« Last post by redwriter1 on May 05, 2026, 04:26:27 pm »
Turns out that other site is closing at the end of the month, we've invited them to join our group.  I sure hope we get more members so we get to hear more songs!!!

Oh and for our new people, love to hear your input on my song.. (smile). Thanks guys!
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Court of the Crimson Crows
« Last post by Elvis Nash on May 05, 2026, 04:26:11 pm »
I still think all of you should create a Youtube channel and create shorts to promote them
I see these AI songs all the time on YouTube. thats a short , that leads to main vid

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/qoNqFDHL3eE


it takes little effort to set them up , And you'll get the listens , at least some , If you did not wanna be heard , you never would have started writing songs , Were all hams. I kinda doubt anyone cares if its a AI song anymore
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MP3 songs for Review/Critique / Re: Métropolitain
« Last post by whengen on May 05, 2026, 04:02:47 pm »
both. it seems. but again, could be me. these speakers on my laptop aren't the best
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