Did you realize this song has only two verses and they are not identical in melody and the rest is just chanting.?? I love this song, why?
That first verse is just magic. The rest is just a feeling. kewl stuff which I know I can't write.



[Verse 1]
Just a young gun with a quick fuse
I was uptight, wanna let loose
I was dreaming of bigger things and
Wanna leave my own life behind
Not a "Yes, sir," not a follower
Fit the box, fit the mold, have a seat
In the foyer, take a number
I was lightning before the thunder

[Pre-Chorus]
Thunder, thunder, thunder, thun—
Thunder, th-th-thunder, thunder
Thunder, thunder, thun—
Thunder, th-th-thunder, thunder

[Chorus]
Thunder, feel the thunder
Lightning, then the thunder
Thunder, feel the thunder
Lightning, then the thunder, thunder, thunder
Thunder

[Verse 2]
Kids were laughin' in my classes
While I was schemin' for the masses
Who do you think you are?
Dreaming 'bout being a big star
They say, "You're basic," they say, "You're easy"
You're always riding in the backseat
Now I'm smilin' from the stage while
You were clappin' in the nosebleeds

I am so honored to get these different versions!!! You guys are so creative.......... just unbelievable.

Anyone else wanna jump in, feel free, thank you all so much!

My pleasure dear lady.
You have created a lovely site. I am delighted to help.

https://suno.com/s/QkD67VwVE65SM5Y2

It did not follow my prompt at all and I ended up with a male/female harmony thing.. haha someday I'll figure it out! LOL

I was sipin in my favorite bar a while back when I realized...OMG I'm the only one left!  These are all human players on my original song me singing.

https://youtu.be/pnRWEgkuph0?si=0h88NjNZtn7C0DTt

Not that long ago I was drinking with my friends
We talked about life and how it might end
We’d laugh about the past and all the stormy weather               
Living for the moment never thought about
forever

Now I don’t want to read too much into this
Don’t want to sound like a paranoid clown
But I just took a look around and saw
Hell I’m the last soul in this bar

The friends I had drinking and laughing
Have all gone on and left me hanging
And now I’m the only face in the mirror
The years have past they seem so far
Now I’m the last soul in this bar

I’m the last soul
Slipping down a wine hole
I’m the last soul in this bar
The last soul
Stuck here on a stool
I’m the last fool in this bar

break

The lights dimmed down and I took a look around
At the empty seats in the quiet sound
That’s me in the mirror giving back a stare
From the last soul   sittin there

Now I love this place and its pine bar top
For thirty years now it’s been my favorite stop
So many good friends that have past along
Sometimes I see em smiling like they’re not even gone

the friends I had drinking and laughing
Have all gone on and left me hanging
And now I’m the only face in the mirror
The years have past they seem so far
Now I’m the last soul in this bar

I’m the last soul
Slipping down a wine hole
I’m the last soul in this bar
The last soul
Stuck here on a stool
I’m the last fool in this bar

Now it’s time to leave I’m being called by the stars
And I don’t wanna be the last soul in this bar
Aww the laaaaast soul.....
Outro break

Hey Stone,

life is getting in the way of my progress just a little bit. However, I am up to seven or eight songs that are good to go with artwork. My goal is 10 to 12 songs. I should be there relatively soon. Thanks for asking. Keep writing.

Your song is kind of an outlier,in that the rest of the songs are country-ish americana-ish. I would categorize the one that you wrote as soft jazz, but I liked what you wrote so much that I had to include it anyway