That's literally the whole point of the song sweetie. I don't know................and I don't wanna know.
What I do know is that "some things" happened cus I get flashes, but I push them away cus why would I want to know now?
Hi Kay-lynn,
here are my 5 cents: this is a serious, emotionally intelligent song. It's not about the abuse itself. It's more about the aftermath, the coping mechanism and the choice to live forward. The topic you write about can be deeply relatable and could therefore be triggering for some listeners.
The chorus is clear but could hit a bit harder. It leans more explanatory than emotional and in my opinion it lacks a sharp, unforgettable phrase. It should land like a truth, not just explain one.
As for the music, I feel it's too full for this topic. I personally would prefer a more minimal instrumentation so the listener can focus more on the lyrics, the message. The full music instrumentation distracts the listener. This is just my personal opinion. if you ask 10 people you'll probably get 10 different opinions. The song is more "the listener sits quietly and feels it" than "big audience singalong". I like it.
put that on this site
Do not write a description on what this songs about
See if they get it
I see this all the time they write a description
But whats in the description is not in the song
That could be the twist on the end , I was molested and here's my defense
OK... I'll give it a shot.
It won't send me a confirmation email so , I guess it's broken.
Kay-lynn it will take a day or two for them to get back to you.
Ok I got the email, I can see the discussions, but I don't see a "post" button. (?)
Blue button to your right.. New Discussion
So weird, I don't see a button, I don't even see a reply button to comment on other people's songs. Can you send me a screenshot? Don't know what I'm missing here... hahha
I assume you've logged in?
Blue tab just above quick links. You do have to be logged in to see it.
When your looking at a post at the bottom it'll have a spot called Leave a Comment
Turns out that other site is closing at the end of the month, we've invited them to join our group. I sure hope we get more members so we get to hear more songs!!!
Oh and for our new people, love to hear your input on my song.. (smile). Thanks guys!
Hey, if you have a great idea, I'm all for it.!!! That's why we call this the sandbox......... we're just building and playing and seeing what works. Would love to hear your version.
